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I. Mind 12-04-04 01:05 PM

The World We Live In
 

Was Bored

Life

We've engaged a generation, full of bad temptation's...
Forgeting there's no replacement for the lives bein taken...
I'm tired of being patient, I'm too tired of wait'n
Wait'n for this nation to become more amazin....
But what suck's is there will be no amazin transformation...
And that's all becuase we had to do a Middle East Envasion...
Why is this world full of lie's, full of too little information...
We really don't live in any kind of great civilized nation...
We live where there will alway's be criminal face's...
& even more ppl with un-usual cruel imagination's...
It's like we live life to cold, in need of incilation...
& i know a cold life isn't a life i'd like to stay in...
As you know, before, this wolrd was full of discrimination...
From enslavin to putting Native's in reserved location's..
These race's, get hated due to the color of wut their face is..
& the only explanation, is that their heart's full of hated...
Why discrimination???We all the same homosapiens...
Maybe we hate all cuz we differ in opinion's and statements...
But we don't only suffer of hatred, wut about low pay wages...
There, familes for month's only crums from garbage have been tasted..
There's more that got it worst, so you don't even know wut pain is...
You try sleepin outside wit no blanket on the cold pavement...
People in all ages, live life all in different pace's...
But only a few ever get a chance to taste the life of greatness...

12/04/04
Dabatos

I. Mind 12-04-04 01:29 PM

Don't You Just Hate It When People Sleep On Your Piece's :(

I. Mind 12-04-04 07:57 PM

Don't You Just Hate It When People Sleep On Your Piece's :(

I. Mind 12-04-04 08:37 PM

Don't You Just Hate It When People Sleep On Your Piece's :(

I. Mind 12-04-04 11:32 PM

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

Bloomquist 12-04-04 11:34 PM

Good piece. i acutally liked this one. Clear message. Collab with me sometime.

KOOL COL-B 12-04-04 11:43 PM

yo this wuz dopeness, i like how u used tha same type of rymes and made it all a clear message (i dunno if that makes scense lol) and WHY THA FUCK iz people sleepin on this??? they sum stupid muthaphukkaz. good shit homey, werd

..ADLIB.. 12-05-04 12:53 AM

Word. This was a very nice, straight piece bro. i enjoyed reading this. i feel your message. its fucked up how we living i was just talkin to my mate about this today. people on the streets who dont even have what it takes to eat. Even that lots of government systems should have done it different and be doing it different. i can relate to what u speakin. neways mate this is a good drop. keep up the good work. 8.9/10

appreciate feed on my OM. check the bottom of my sig. Peace

I. Mind 12-05-04 02:07 AM

thanx man, really appreciate it, uppin

High-Dro 12-05-04 02:49 AM

yo. dope shit homie definetly feelin ur message...check out "14 barz" i jus did...pretty weak but gimme feedback homie

I. Mind 12-05-04 11:58 AM

thanx, already did also^^

uppin

Critic 12-05-04 12:10 PM

Damme ma you come well deep in this OM I was really
feeling it,.. Flow, vocab complexity all on point this was
a verse hott dropp...

Keep them coming gurl...

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