Im Just Rippin In Here
 

(where you from?) im from tha D bitch
niggaz talk shit and get sprayed wit full clips
yall on dat bullshit
but we got dat weaponry
and real soldiers know dat warfare is nessissary
start writtin obitchuaries
times up, now you gone
and you was tha main one talkin bout "nigga fuck home!"
them bitches dead wrong
so they end up wrongfully dead
hoes get killed for givin head and then askin for bread
:shocked:
***thats it right now, i wanna hear somebody else other than myself!***

lookin for some feedback. and remember.....im 15 years old, so hopefully i can get even more props. understand me???

damn, can somebody get at me???

well fuck it then

Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooo

i like dat shit alot so wats good in da D
dayum dat was hot but ah work on ya structure
dat was tight

elevate..................a lot
work on ya srtucture definitely...work on ya rhyme scheme too.....
this was very porr work..................................4/10

ayo, good lookin yall, CHECK OUT MY NEW SHIT!!! and fuck dat hoe ass nigga drastic 2. get at tha kid