Magnum Opus..~Tha Forgotten one~
 

reminiscing over scriptures written/
picturing Hyrogliphics of figures unliving demons attacking me so i must stay distant/
fighting to complete my lifes mission yet its hard when no one wants to listen/
writing more chapters then bibles because rivals want me to give in to a life of sin/
i want to be set free we're new heights begin/
to stare into sights an not be questioned on my own religion/
i believe in my visions an whats been told to me/
answering everyones problems an yet i wait for mine to be un-folded to me/
maybe then i can understand who an where i am really...

*switch*

Hyrogliphics foretell tha future of a murderer bloodshed rained ova tha belligerent era/
as tha prophetic scriptures overwhelm tha nation with mass hysteria/
pass foolish ones an leave them em' wit sicc savages/
read tha passages of three murderous cold hearted lyricist/
as I double tha count of tha departed/
I promised all witnesses lay stiff when bombarded wit tha three of me equaling tha hardest/
deadly departure if u fools wasnt ready then why u start for?/
why'd you ever come near tha darkness if you asking where's tha light stored/
ive indured injuries from battles fault lyrically/
metamorphosis takes it's place with sicc an murderous until we manifest metamorphically/
telepathically i set things it motion/
wether minds or current in tha ocean/
exposing ones strength/
an exploding thoughts touching all with a intellectual sense/
for tha others fold-in because of their physical form/
it aint strong enough for the tribological storm/
born into a swarm of confused minds intwine/
an combind all blood lines eventually growin horns an burn until tha end of time....

shit flowed nice as hell easy to read im not gunna qoute cause im tired i like the begining good use of vocab blah blah peep im back(bitch)

DAMN...YOU ON SOME NEW SHIT...THIS WAS PRETTY IMPRESSIVE FOR YA FIRST DROP...KEEP DOIN YA THING, PLAYA

DAMN THAT SHIT WAS NICE SON...WAS MOS DEF FEELIN IT

KEEP SPITTIN AIGHT PLAYA

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NICE PIECE

KEEP IT UP

HOLLA

Word this was some nice shit....1

damn this is a pure piece of lyrical phatness, fosho playa, keep spittin

This is nice, vocab and knowledge was explored, nice wordplay and imagery put through this... I didnt like how ya formatted the verse, space ya bars out, its more easier to read and follow, but thats a minor... The rhythm was on point, the multies kept syllable nice, some internal rhymes I noticed... The wordplay and vocab combined bought some imagery together, knowledge words were well used and described, I was feeling it... Got lost on where you were going sometimes, more substance to your verse woulda made this flawless, you got a good style, hope ta see more of your work in the future... Feeling this, keep dropping the gems...

Peez...

uppin this master~piece

uppin

hottness man, deep too, im feelin it. keep spittin.

uppin an old peice