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JaeBurnz354 vs RapVerse
Battle Rules:
Your # of lines must be the same as mine, or less No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Post within 20 minutes of me posting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-05-04 at 03:20 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
RapVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 02:53 PM.
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Man this is stupidity. he wants to win?? He-just-can't.
There's more shit in his verse than sewage treatment-plant I'll beat the man, he's in Dan-ger, I make this gay-hurt only by spittin pure fire and watching as 'jae-burns' and You'll never-Win-this, you're dead-and-finished I'm gonna wreck-this-bitch as he gets-diminished Judging by his text alone, I can tell he's not-clever... Quote:
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JaeBurnz354 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 03:16 PM.
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Why in the hell did i think of battling this new be...
You not talented, i can see right thorugh you like rubies/ Spit to complicate what you anticipate to be wack... But wait in suspense if truthfully think or feel like that/ Nobody is layed back, I'm especially fierce here... Ya style has lyrica gaping hole like pierced ears/ You's a nobody why even step up to the plate... Please call barry bonds for some steroids to take/ There that should give you more of a punchline... I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting) |
Voted For: RapVerse
vote rapverse verse was more harder and alot better to read more clever all around |
^ Will that vote be DQed??
Damn these votes coming in slow today. ^ing. |
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Voted For: JaeBurnz354
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to RV flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, JAE had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
At last, a vote. the first vote this week.
I hope all the other votes don't take this long. upping |
Voted For: RapVerse
ok rapverse had a better flow and structure dope bounce to it jae had a good shit too but not as good punches and disses were tied as was vocob also here so all i have left to place a vote is flow which rapverse won hands down Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: JaeBurnz354
I gots to give this to Jae his punches were hardhittin' remind me of some shyt I wrote lol..... I liked both verses but one stood out more.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: JaeBurnz354
Man this is stupidity. he wants to win?? He-just-can't. There's more shit in his verse than sewage treatment-plant I'll beat the man, he's in Dan-ger, I make this gay-hurt only by spittin pure fire and watching as 'jae-burns' and You'll never-Win-this, you're dead-and-finished I'm gonna wreck-this-bitch as he gets-diminished Judging by his text alone, I can tell he's not-clever... Quote: Originally Posted by JaeBurn354 i replied to your open 5 w/e call out and or w/e ^^^^^^^^^ YOUR PUNCHES WAS KINDA PLAYED OUT FAM....NO HARD DECENT PUNCHES CAME FROM THIS VERSE EXCEPT THAT LAST BAR WITH THE PM QUOTE OTHER THAN THAT THIS WAS AN WEAK VERSE Why in the hell did i think of battling this new be... You not talented, i can see right thorugh you like rubies/ Spit to complicate what you anticipate to be wack... But wait in suspense if truthfully think or feel like that/ Nobody is layed back, I'm especially fierce here... Ya style has lyrica gaping hole like pierced ears/ You's a nobody why even step up to the plate... Please call barry bonds for some steroids to take/ There that should give you more of a punchline... I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting) ^^^^^^^^^^^ O OK PUNCHES WERE OK NOT GOOD THOUGH ELEVATE ON THAT FAM...FLOW WAS GOOD...HAD AN LIL WORDPLAY THERE.......REMEMBER TO USE PERSONALS OFTEN IN YOUR BATTLES AIGHT OVERALL= THIS BATTLE WAS KIND ONE-SIDED RAPVERSE HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES EXCEPT THE LAST LINE WITH AN PERSONAL...BUT OTHER THAN THAT HIS VERSE WASNT GOOD NO HARD PUNCHES, GOOD FLOW...ITS JUST THE PUNCHES U LACKED IN......JAE BURNS CAME ALRIGHT HE GOT MY VOTE BY AN LAND SLIDE...JAE ELEVATE ON PUNCHES HIT HARDER NEXT TIME AND USE PERSONALS...HE GOT MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES....LIKE I SAID JAEBURNS WON THIS BY AN LAND SLIDE PEACE |
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