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B.WALLakaILLNESS vs Phantom
Battle Rules:
6-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-08-04 at 01:08 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 01:09 AM.
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B.WALLakaILLNESS has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 01:10 AM.
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.........Aw lord, everybody please believe this man is gay
......Think about it, his name says illness is only an a.k.a! ...So what else do I gotta say to show how bad you are? I'll have your voice box skippin 10x worse than ya avatar! Plus heres a couple more punches that imma toss at you Imma make this kid 'blow up' quicker than 'tall prostitues'! C'mon kid is basically known that you stand in my shadow Say you from the West end...but its an 'L' in this battle! ..Catch up bitch, basically beggin for you to get with me .....My votes will make the "ties die" quicker than hippies! |
Phantom wack ass action clip, the ring you wore sucked dick
Cant Phathom how deep i get, when i say rip consider u blest only way to get big is if i dissed n took ur PH and make an anthem... phantoms crazy, turns ghost, patrick swayse 90s was best at most... leave you crippled in ur tomb like a baby came out the ass instead of the womb... signs shows suckered look at this toon signs cant depict the mess after the ka-boom i leave ya abstract like contact bone face to bruise and absent like atztec lay in rune... im the undertaker so expect the ur herse n shake the tombstone... im the take you under so check ur verse n break the wishbone... |
nice im out tired just got back from GA and no sleep tired as fuck ill hit ya with a better verse some other time
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
Yo man this nigka sonned B Wall like "oh shyt!" :hump:
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upppping, thanks for the heads up yo, you pretty good ya self
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Voted For: Phantom
v/ Phantom Wall: Phantom wack ass action clip, the ring you wore sucked dick Cant Phathom how deep i get, when i say rip consider u blest didn't rhyme..blah @ punch. only way to get big is if i dissed n took ur PH and make an anthem... phantoms crazy, turns ghost, patrick swayse 90s was best at most... again..didn't rhyme... weak punch. leave you crippled in ur tomb like a baby came out the ass instead of the womb... signs shows suckered look at this toon blah!!..at this structure signs cant depict the mess after the ka-boom i leave ya abstract like contact bone face to bruise and absent like atztec lay in rune... blah!! im the undertaker so expect the ur herse n shake the tombstone... im the take you under so check ur verse n break the wishbone... 1st line was decent..but coulda bin worded better..punch=blah Basically this wasn't a great verse...1st 4 lines didn't even rhyme.. and punches were weak.. weak attempt's at a personal on his name.. u need to concentrate and word ya shit better... try workin on creativity and try adding some wordplay and metas... work on ya punches. Phantom: .........Aw lord, everybody please believe this man is gay ......Think about it, his name says illness is only an a.k.a! lol..nice. ...So what else do I gotta say to show how bad you are? I'll have your voice box skippin 10x worse than ya avatar! lol. Plus heres a couple more punches that imma toss at you Imma make this kid 'blow up' quicker than 'tall prostitues'! meh.. but decent. C'mon kid is basically known that you stand in my shadow Say you from the West end...but its an 'L' in this battle! good. ..Catch up bitch, basically beggin for you to get with me .....My votes will make the "ties die" quicker than hippies! dope wordplay. Nice verse soc... Basically u ripped this kid with an average verse. nice personals on his name, avy and profile. that tie die punch was pretty creative. Phantom had an overall better verse. lol @ u highlightin' and quotin' yer verse so rv kids would understand. v/phantom |
woooooooooord, lets get more votes in this biznatch
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my shit was wack its funny because when i write wack shit its the only time people vote as for my good shit no one votes for me...you won this no contest i think i hit the bottle of jack daniels that day hehe
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Voted For: Phantom
phantom came harder,he had better lines and he had a nice flow and structure.i liked his closer and he used wordplay which is good.b.wall came complex but stretched out and his punches werent humorous which is important to have.so my vote goes to........... |
upping............................................
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Voted For: B.WALLakaILLNESS
gonna go with b.wall just for the sake that this was his worst battle as in rhyme but still had punches...cant let a kat get knocked out for messing up.. |
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