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Zeke 12-06-04 01:52 AM

--Emericas Fynest--
 


I'm Fresh Of The Porch Kid The Flow Sounds Better
Signed With Emericas Fynest, Like Genuine Leather
One Click........Streetryda Came And Picked Me Up
If The Fynest Comes ,Out You Cowards Best Duck
Faggots Get Eaten Up Like Fat Ppl On Sub Way Diets
Frunt On My Click I'll Pop Threw Ya Crew With Riots
I'm Tired Of Nigkas Saying Like Whom,s Better Then Whom
Line You Up One By One And Street Sweep You With A Broom
Like trauma In The Emergency Room I Bring Tragic , I'm Fantastic
With The Flow Try Me You'll Be Quickly Pink SLipped In Plastic..
Stund And You'll Be Banished Quicker Then You Can Write A Verse
I'm Worst Then Bin Ladden How I Terrorize , And Leave In A Hearse
Watch How Emericas Orignal Fynest Take Over This Rap Verse
Coz The Gift In Us........Gave You The Blue Print Curse

Wickedclown 12-06-04 01:57 AM

good rhymes... vocab was pretty decent... structure could use work tho... lines tward the end were stretched but overall this was a pretty decent drop.........good luck in EF homie...

6.5/10

good drop. keep em commin

Willa 12-06-04 04:00 AM

i wasnt really feeling this work on ur vocab ur flow was good but thats about it i feel ur punches lacked and were played just my opinion jsut elevate and keep dropping no matter what if ur not better than anbody u still can be dope
anyone that elevates as an emcee is dope in my opinion so just keep droppin dont let haters stop u

Loveliss Grandz 12-06-04 09:48 AM

aight drop.flow was good.willa said the rest.6/10keep on droppin'


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