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Conclusion vs final
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10-14 Line's. No Crew Votes. No Recycling. No Biting. No Feeding. No Dickriding. This Is a Topical Battle So Don't Vote If You Don't Understand. Topic:You Come HomeTo Discover Your Girl Is Cheating On You With Another Dude.[B/] Minimum posts to vote: [b]250 Check in by: 12-06-04 at 04:55 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Conclusion has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 03:58 PM.
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final has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 04:02 PM.
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Inserted The Newly Cut Key's For My New Crib Into The Keyhole. Heard Grunt's Of Desperation Entered As a Figure Franticly Rolled. It Was a Dude Half-Naked With His Boxer's On, My Girl Just Gazed. I Thought My Mind Had Tripped, Beyond Disbelief I Was Amazed. A Emotional Scar Imbedded My Memory & Stained My Girl's Trust. All My Feeling's For Her Were Banished,Love, Passion, & Lust. I Wanted To Diminish The Dude, But I Was Too Antaganized To Care. My Girl Sitting There Sobbing, Covered With The Duvet Trapped In a Prysm Nightmare. First Time This Has Happened To Me, I Didn't Know What To Do. I Thought She Gave Me Her Heart, Couldn't Absorb The Situation She Put Me Thru. My Heart Shattered Under Pressure Of My Prolonging Emotion. Could Tell My Chick Was Seeing Him All Along, He Even Had His Wash Bag & His Lotion. Wanted To Leave This World, Leave Behind Her Unfaithful Presence. I Slit Her Wrist's But The Lord, Would Not ...Remove Her Essence. This Has To Be My Shittest Freestyle Ever lol. |
it was a clouded night tonight..had sense of murky essence
i had a hunch of wrongdoing, restlessness had its pressence parked the car,got out,and advanced to the front of the house entered the key and opened the door..horrified at my spouse i developed a rage...it plummited to the base of my stomach it felt like my face ignited and the texture felt rugged couldnt believe wat i was seeing, its obvious this was a dream is this just a disguised vision of a man penetrating my queen gathered back my conscience realized this aint fake its real with criminal intent, i get the weapon wit most damage appeal but as i cocked back the axe ready to destroy this disgrace she pulled a .45 and released 500 pounds of pressure to my face isnt it bizarre i got hit by the bitch who was just playin me but dont worry ill decapitate her limbs wen i ressurect my body good luck peace |
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