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I. Mind 12-07-04 12:39 AM

The "Another"
 
The "Another"

This unbarable feeling inside too hard to explain...
Life to hard to sustain, my whole world exploded,
Nothing mattered, my heart completed shattered,
This un-stoppable rush of blood flowing through my vein's,
Poisoned, causing me to think of nothing,
other then why,
Before this angel was so close
To the tip of my fingers,
But is now far from the reach of my hand's,
All i want is for my arm's to sorround her,
All i want is to look at her when ever i want,
And not afraid she'll look back
then she would do the same,
But what saddens me the most,
Is that the way i feel,
She feels the same about another,
Wishing that
this "another" is me,
Sadely he isn't,
This "another?"
Don't know who that "another" is,
But that "another,"
Soon will have the arm's
To sorround her
When ever he wants...
While I sit here dying of old age
Alone Forever.

12/05/04

-Chris Dabatos

*This Is Not Jackie*

I. Mind 12-07-04 09:22 PM

uppin........................

Dabatos 12-18-04 01:12 AM

the another............. uppin

Ill-Grammatix 12-18-04 04:37 PM

hey... is this actually I.mind or someone using the account cuz i coulda swore i.mind was a female....lol... anyways this was a really dope piece... had a lot of emotion in it... sounded like a true to life, from the heart open mic.... on some def poetry type of feel... if it's i.mind, stay with this type of writing.... if it's someone else using the account ya need to make ya own account and drop as much as possible... (peep my thread in Lyricist Longe... looking for OM and Poetry heads)

Dabatos 12-19-04 11:11 AM

haha, na this ain't I. Mind, dis her close friend Dabatis aka Chris, i just put in my tittle I. Mind cuz me n her are close like that ;)

Dabatos 12-19-04 11:12 AM

but hey man, thanx alot for the feed, i really appreciate it

Dabatos 12-20-04 12:17 PM

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

Dabatos 12-25-04 02:44 PM

Thanx, the feedback is much appreciated..


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