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Artemis 12-07-04 09:12 AM

SPuL-Bitch Please IV... (not finished)
 
yea, i left feed in Calam million eyes and Triple's thread.

Also, this jus my verse, Triple, Kingz, and this other cat from Boston who signed to some local label gonan be on it. But yea, fastforward to 2:29

www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless


vote it hot if you like. ;) weerd...

Kingz 12-07-04 09:53 AM

haha weerd.................

Artemis 12-07-04 11:33 AM

^do yo verse ASAP. well atleast by the 18th. Also, DL it again, cuz I put some dif effects on it. aight? pc...

Enygma 12-07-04 03:13 PM

Lyrics were cool on this one, but you need to even out the vocal level a little. In the beginning you were kinda speaking soft....then you got a little louder...then softer again. Try to keep your voice at the same level throughout the whole song. It also sounded a little too echoey to me, just didn't give your voice a crisp sound.....I think you would be better off without the echo. Anyway, the shit was cool flow wise and lyrical wise, I just think the first two areas I mentioned could be worked on a little :thumbup:

Artemis 12-07-04 09:42 PM

^haha thanks, man. After I free up, we should callab on some shit. weerd...


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