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*Elest Bytch* 12-07-04 01:38 PM

Crazy Bytch*
 
:shoot:
****See am da ELest Bytch that puts it down on da flo.
****I slap hos and throw them out the doe.
****I'll take her man and lay him on the bed
and do crazy shit even suck his dick and make
him never forget.
****I'll push ya wipe and make ya neva forget
that am that Elest Bytch thats here to runn this shyt bytch****
:thefinger

Class.Sic 12-07-04 01:56 PM

too short...should be longer...anyways leave feedback on my open mic...first love...link is in the sig...

overall...3/10 for effort...no hate.

Lil C 12-07-04 02:16 PM

come on, u LOOK like u got some talent......i mean dat could be MUCH longer n revised a lil bit..not very good vocab, n lackin multies n punches......keep workin on it girl...4/10

Willa 12-07-04 05:15 PM

2/10 flow was preetty good no vocab or nothin and u just came off as a major net slut:(


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