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Acuity 12-07-04 06:06 PM

Seasons
 
A quick poem yo:

Seasons

A transient, phenemonal embodiment of nature
The cyclic seasons, cycle and then denature
From Spring to Summer to Autumn and then Winter
Each as its own properties, each 1 can flip~ya
From bistering cold, to heat that can scold
To optimum conditions, allowing life to glisten
As a child i was often fascinated, by what God had created
It's so complicated yet so easy, each one is interrelated
Markers of time, the subject of this poetic rhyme
Seasons, eclectic manifestations and creations
Of Gods masterful will and uncomprehedible skill

Feedbak alwayz returned - dorp a link :thumbup:

Acuity 12-07-04 06:13 PM

fbak yo...up up ump...fbak yo

DrasticMeasureZ 12-07-04 06:18 PM

Whoa~!~!... Nice Vocab...good Meta'z...........

I Didnt Sense Any Motions


But Vocab And Meta'z Is What Stood Out Fam

Acuity 12-07-04 06:25 PM

yo thanx drastic, gd fbak fam, would return favour but ive already checked all your rhymes out at tha mo..............

High-Dro 12-07-04 06:32 PM

that was real dope!...good vocab and it's true, seasons r pretty amazing

check out my poem.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164584

Acuity 12-07-04 06:43 PM

thanx High Dro - favour returned man..........................anymo fbak yo

Bloomquist 12-07-04 09:06 PM

Decent vocab. It was a complex piece of mind, but the emotion wasnt flowing well through it all the way. Keep writing

Acuity 12-08-04 02:41 AM

gd fbak yo upppppppppppppppppin yo

Acuity 12-08-04 05:54 PM

fbak plz...................

Acuity 12-11-04 05:10 AM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppin fbak always returned

PayDay 12-20-04 11:31 AM

tight poem fam...i was feeling this...your vocab and metas were good...the only thing that lacked was emotion, but then again, its about seasons...but it was deffinatley tight...9/10...keep droppin...~1~


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