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Seasons
A quick poem yo:
Seasons
A transient, phenemonal embodiment of nature The cyclic seasons, cycle and then denature From Spring to Summer to Autumn and then Winter Each as its own properties, each 1 can flip~ya From bistering cold, to heat that can scold To optimum conditions, allowing life to glisten As a child i was often fascinated, by what God had created It's so complicated yet so easy, each one is interrelated Markers of time, the subject of this poetic rhyme Seasons, eclectic manifestations and creations Of Gods masterful will and uncomprehedible skill Feedbak alwayz returned - dorp a link :thumbup: |
fbak yo...up up ump...fbak yo
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Whoa~!~!... Nice Vocab...good Meta'z...........
I Didnt Sense Any Motions But Vocab And Meta'z Is What Stood Out Fam |
yo thanx drastic, gd fbak fam, would return favour but ive already checked all your rhymes out at tha mo..............
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that was real dope!...good vocab and it's true, seasons r pretty amazing
check out my poem.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164584 |
thanx High Dro - favour returned man..........................anymo fbak yo
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Decent vocab. It was a complex piece of mind, but the emotion wasnt flowing well through it all the way. Keep writing
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gd fbak yo upppppppppppppppppin yo
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fbak plz...................
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppin fbak always returned
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tight poem fam...i was feeling this...your vocab and metas were good...the only thing that lacked was emotion, but then again, its about seasons...but it was deffinatley tight...9/10...keep droppin...~1~
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