Yung Deedz vs King~~Dipset
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 7
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Fagging
No Dick rydin Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 110

Check in by: 12-10-04 at 08:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Yung Deedz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 08:17 PM.

King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 08:18 PM.

U just a small man
in the frame
first off salute to the general
before u speak my name
and my shoes aint designed
foe break dance
Ill scuff ya white tee
push ya wig back and swell ya face fam
Ill teach u how ta stunt
cuz nigga acting hard now
wit his mans lata on
get rolled up like a blunt
in white sheets
u rollin like the klu klux klan
I know niggas who'll chop ya body up
and turn it to spam
Tell the truth
im really the reason u smoke
cuz i got chu moving off ya block
like coke fresh off the boat
shit!
wat the fuck is clogging ya throat
oh i know
it was my nut from ya girls mouth she spit in ya throat
Look man
i spit heavy ta crush
I lift bars ta beats
ad the weight u push is similar ta dust
If oun like me
then do somethin bout it
cuz i can change ya whole wardrobe
to a funeral outfit

This warm up talk son

Aii Here I Go

Ayo Newb nigga On the Block tryna Push The Weight
He jus a "salt'' witout the "pepper" N I control his Fate*

Dis Airhead couldnt elevate even if he was at Da bottom of a pool**
Ive seen betta spits than his when my lil brother drool

This Nigga Dumb...He Uses his ole ass recyled lines from A post
couldnt Think Of N E thing else So he Jus used his Shoes 2 boast ***
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Explanation
1st*
Salt N pepper ( rappaz That had a song named Fate)
2nd**
In a Pool your suppose to elevate from bottom to top
3rd***
Thats The same Lines he used n a Post One time Check it Out
Link http://community.rapverse.com/showt...529#post1794529
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If You Dont wanna Put in The link The Jus Click his name where he post and the Go to Find All post by Yung Deedz and youll See those Same Linez.....hes a dumbass
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And Yall he went all dem Lines And Watch i Still win

Uppin for votes

Get it straight
 

First off those line posted earlier was a freestyle i thought on the spot so i just put it unde the cypher. The reason i used some lines again was because this battle was a easy one cuz i knew dude wasn't really worth it. Other heads was like this kat was too easy ta battle so don't even bother wit him. This dude softa then a teddy bear quoting his wack punchlines that didn't make sense to the point he had to explain wat he was talking bout than trana put me under deep.

Dude get cha self in order

Come correct next time before u write.
Wat u wrote u wrote was straight up gutter, clutter straight up garbage

Holla at cha boy Yung Deedz
Give me them votes people

Well Since you think So Watch How Yo Bitch Ass Loose and you betta not be PMin n e of them bitch ass friends of your for votes..............
Uppin for votes

Damn Recycled lines and This Bitch cant even Foloow The rules look at the thing I Said 6-7 bars WTF did he do to his verse them thangs aint no bars

Voted For: King~~Dipset

King Dipset got this no doubt...

first of all, he obeyed the rules on the battle, 6-7 lines, and second he just took it...

personals -
punches - King
entertainment - King
multis - def. King
structure - King, easy to follow, the other dudes was all chopped up and shit it seemed reading it

V/ King~~Dipset

U got that cuz i didn't follow the fuckin instructions. I'll give u that cuzz
u beat me fair and square, that was on me, but i got only respect foe so show me the same cuz im new on this computer shit. oh we gone battle again and next time ima come correct.

ONLY ONE VOTE?????
u need more than that ta win

WHO THE FUCK IS KWITTA
A FUCKING MADE UP Rapper
HOW COME U DON"T BATTLE???????/

Oh I got the win That quick ? Damn I Told you to follow da rules Mayne and if you wouldve Put it in Bars you still wouldve Lost and N E Time you want A Rematch jus tell Me Bcuz I see I got Another Win And dont know where it Came From So it Had to B this battle bcuz you didnt Follow The Rules I Guess an admin. Disqualified Your verse

A nAwl Mayne It takes 5 Votes to Win A BAttle if you Didnt know Mayne Its Not One vote LOL If thats what You were Thinkin

Voted For: King~~Dipset

dipdet gets this easily he had a better flow and structure and he had better punches.deedz came weak and selfglorifying and he had a very bad structure it was hard to flow with it.nuff said.
RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY SIG PLZ THX

Voted For: King~~Dipset

yung- your verse was elementary man.....read some tutorials....u had no multis...metaphors...maybe 1 halfway decent punchline....but other than that...you really need to elevate....no hate...im just stating my opinion

king- you didnt come too hard...but u didnt really have to....nice personal...and meta...u should still work on the multis more....

voted for king because he had a nice personal...the punches that he had hit harder

no hate