lil C.A.L.I vs Yung Deedz
 

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Yung Deedz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 09:18 PM.

lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 09:22 PM.

Ima suspect
known foe mass murda
Its the kid Y.D. Young Deedz
a name u heard of
Im ready ta take ya city
off the maps
my punchlines hit like two A-bombs
so its useless ta be loaded wit straps
Ill crip walk on u
till the blood comes out
fuck the paramedics Ill take u too ya house
so u can die on ya couch
Ima self made man
from the bottom
so its not a problem ta step on lil sally
or watever u call him
when u approach me
take ya ten steps back
cuz my nut goes a long way
u look like u just O.D on crack
look youngin
u fallin back in the race
he need a beverage ta quinch his thirst
So i just pissed in his face

young deedz callin ppl a maggot
like u got room u a herbie ass faggot
says he will battle & merk anyone
ill give u a heart attack like BIG PUN
lil cali ripin u so bad givin u a disease
my barz givin u 'SARS' like the chinese
u claim u hard for havin 0-0 in your text
when your lines need to be perplexed
all i can think is who will merk u next
yes lil cali is 1-3 but that doesnt matter cuz u cant touch me
you rap like old people fuck slow and sloppy
bitch has gay poetry saved to his floppy
its 7 o'clock and this fag still hasnt dropped
cuz he knows hes gonna get stopped

Voted For: lil C.A.L.I

both came weak but lil cali came harder simply cuz of his flow and structure and yung deedz had a bad flow and structure.he was self glorifying and he had wack and simple rhymes.he needs to elevate on complexity and try using unique ideas.so my vote goes to lil cali nuff said no hate
RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY SIG THX

upping this ppl plz honest votes dont let this sit!! :thumbup:

uppin this ppl plz honest votes dont let this jus sit here!! :thumbup: