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DrasticMeasureZ 12-07-04 11:17 PM

When I Die........
 
CHORUSX1

When I die hopefully I will leave stories behind
When I die I’ll leave people with tears in there eyes
When I die, I’ll leave my family emotionally skard
When I die, I wont complain when I’ve made it this far





Sitting in my studio making dope tracks, produce them in stores, also soled out many stores
I drop tracks from the deep in my soul, that’s why I got popularity, that’s why my shit is cold
I never drop something that don’t make me, I spit things from my pupil, the things I see
Why u think the people on the streets are struggling giving me props cause they have seen
You can call me nas the spoken writer, story teller, people know that my shit aint fiction
I speak from within, I know I aint god, but I’m releasing the streets deadly lethal sins
I’m here to give these people, an replenish of what’s going on in the hood, the trouble
My people been through. Most artiest try to do what I do, but they always…… fumble
Haters always try To take me out, but sometimes i got to take the gun from the shelf
Make there bodies an blood see through lingerie, but my mind gots to be stealth
These haters is creative than an famous art painter, I gots to be an top thinker
I got to watch my back, in every direction, cause one bullet can be my life sinker
But I’ve out-smarted them, have they’ve heard me, do they know my tracks are dope
once I die, I’ll leave tears falling,, my family emotionally skard, but I’ve gotten this far
Haters will still hate me, my dope tracks will leaving stories to be TOLD~!





CHORUSX2

When I die hopefully I will leave stories behind
When I die I’ll leave people with tears in there eyes
When I die, I’ll leave my family emotionally skard
When I die, I wont complain when I’ve made it this far

Kawn Flixx 12-07-04 11:22 PM

played topic..but pretty good content..

I like most of the lines in the middle more..you got better
as It went on...and judgin the closer..your as cocky as me :)

but I'm more so...I give it a 7.99999999/10

damn poetic MC's stealin my style :wtf:

lol peace fam keep droppin or else

kid Knockout 12-07-04 11:25 PM

sweet rhymes....keep it up

ILL-iterit 12-08-04 01:50 AM

i liked the plot for real but i would suggest droppin more punch lines and put a lil excitement into the verse....other than that , i think u doin well


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