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A Crimson Death
Crimson with fury, my words wept, savage rage
Catastrophe soon as the adept pen touches the page Launching a critical mutiny, crept towards old age Primary stage, Judas, I propose to stab it in the back My rose is my youth, I’m launching a vicious attack Against death, that’s the truth, prepare for a fiasco Mass blow to the head, grim reaper dead on my glass flo’ Visionary shapes from the blood from where I dragged him Left him and returned to discover decaying limbs Performing rituals, I swim in the pool of red fluid Breast stroking, vest soaking, chest smoking From mandatory sins, immortality begins Obtain wisdom from developing youth knowledge No weak posture so I stand prominent eternally Infinite time to structure fierce vigour internally Evolution of mind depends on status of spirit I retrieved my soul and lit it, not literally but hypothetically I hear you weak cry pathetically, it sickens me Flood of tears to end an ongoing drought My heart sticks to my paper, to this past time I’m devout Silent talent about to uproar in sickness and in quickness Death is deceased, be prepared the future is me |
yo kid, dis was tight................go try out 4 PSA in crews n collaborations and drop sumin or put a link 2 dis,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,overall 8/10
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thanxs man if i gt time
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man that shit was sick u got some talent keep going
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thanxs kid peace
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