fredunlimited333 vs Elemental Soul
 

Battle Rules:
due 30 minutes
10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 04:04 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

fredunlimited333 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 03:35 PM.

Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 03:35 PM.

holla at ur boy tha nine's cocked baretta aimed at ur dome
uzi da doozey dont fuck wit me u get dead by tha crome
life aint all about violence and hate love does exist
like tha love i hav for tha girl u thought loved you, but life is a bitch
it would be best for you to kill urself mak my job lil bit easier
i'm tha death reeper killin dem fags u say u not but ur girl dont believe ya
and thats sad over a month u shudda fucked or sumpthin
u spendin all ur bread on a bitch aparently for nuthin
pussy da bitch set tha battle up elements dont mix with soul
u tha type of dude to put crisco in ur hair to make ur hair glo

Unlimited just reached his limit,like mice around an elephant,
Quit tryen,cuz you'll neva be visible,unlike snoop doggs skeleton,
Stop playen yaself,cuz your like a guitar with no strings,
And you'll neva be "shining" even if u were stanley and king,
Ya bitch ass is wrong, like holy water in a bong,
Your style reminds me of a bald man going in a hair salon,
This newbie cant spit,he's like a dead cock,
Cuz even if ya name is "Fred",you will never make the "bedrock",
And now for the fatality,what a tragedy for this asshole,
He got gassed up,like when the U.S. fucked with Castro,

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Voted For: Elemental Soul

Aii This IS What i feel

Fred
Mayne WTF happened on that last line i mean its like i said n your other battles its like you jus stop tryin and thats really gonna Hurt You N The Long run Mayne U Need to try To Hold That Same Power from Beggining To The End Do U Feel Me ?
All Respect

Elemental
ya verse was all the way of what i was expecting from you i like the last bar and the way you started its a good example of a decent verse if u know wat i mean >?
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

Unlimited just reached his limit,like mice around an elephant,
Quit tryen,cuz you'll neva be visible,unlike snoop doggs skeleton,
^^okay puch coulda been more direct...
Stop playen yaself,cuz your like a guitar with no strings,
And you'll neva be "shining" even if u were stanley and king,
^^decent punch
Ya bitch ass is wrong, like holy water in a bong,
Your style reminds me of a bald man going in a hair salon,
^^kinda weak
This newbie cant spit,he's like a dead cock,
Cuz even if ya name is "Fred",you will never make the "bedrock",
^^lol played but nice cuz i aint seen it in a minute
And now for the fatality,what a tragedy for this asshole,
He got gassed up,like when the U.S. fucked with Castro,
^^lol nice punch

nice punches.......okay vocab..........god structure.........saw some multi's.......good flow..........coulda used more personals....6/10

holla at ur boy tha nine's cocked baretta aimed at ur dome
uzi da doozey dont fuck wit me u get dead by tha crome
^^weak punch
life aint all about violence and hate love does exist
like tha love i hav for tha girl u thought loved you, but life is a bitch
^^weak punch again
it would be best for you to kill urself mak my job lil bit easier
i'm tha death reeper killin dem fags u say u not but ur girl dont believe ya
^^weak punch
and thats sad over a month u shudda fucked or sumpthin
u spendin all ur bread on a bitch aparently for nuthin
^^okay punch
pussy da bitch set tha battle up elements dont mix with soul
u tha type of dude to put crisco in ur hair to make ur hair glo
^^weak attempt at a personal/punch

okay you came weak as no other man.................ya structure was off here and there........ya had no vocab...........ya punches didnt hit.....flow was okay..........multi attempts were weak........
3/10

Voted For: Elemental Soul

holla at ur boy tha nine's cocked baretta aimed at ur dome
uzi da doozey dont fuck wit me u get dead by tha crome
life aint all about violence and hate love does exist
like tha love i hav for tha girl u thought loved you, but life is a bitch
it would be best for you to kill urself mak my job lil bit easier
i'm tha death reeper killin dem fags u say u not but ur girl dont believe ya
and thats sad over a month u shudda fucked or sumpthin
u spendin all ur bread on a bitch aparently for nuthin
pussy da bitch set tha battle up elements dont mix with soul
u tha type of dude to put crisco in ur hair to make ur hair glo
-Rather than break it down line for line I'll just say dissin a kid by sayin ur fuck his girl isn't effective especially here, same for talkin bout berretas and nines... with that said you understand why I think you lost, your punches were weak try to learn from the cat who just battled you.....
Unlimited just reached his limit,like mice around an elephant,
Quit tryen,cuz you'll neva be visible,unlike snoop doggs skeleton,
good opener, i got a chuckle off the punch
Stop playen yaself,cuz your like a guitar with no strings,
And you'll neva be "shining" even if u were stanley and king,
lol had to ask my girl cuz I never read the book or saw the movie but decent shit
Ya bitch ass is wrong, like holy water in a bong,
Your style reminds me of a bald man going in a hair salon,
wasnt really feelin it, see where u were goin but i think this bar has less impact then the previous two
This newbie cant spit,he's like a dead cock,
Cuz even if ya name is "Fred",you will never make the "bedrock",
lol, not the most original flip but decent
And now for the fatality,what a tragedy for this asshole,
He got gassed up,like when the U.S. fucked with Castro,
[b]decent closer- the verse wasn't off the wall nuts, but it was consistent and your punches were effective, your opponent just didn't type out a decent "text" verse, too much filler, you easily got my vote....1 -- I doubt u got either of you got enough posts yet but if u do drop a vote in enygma vs. seventhird in audio battles...1

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Voted For: Elemental Soul

Yo that snoop dogg punchline was funny as hell his punches and his flow was better

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Voted For: Elemental Soul

A'ight...this was a pretty good battle...both came good, but Elemental came harder in the end...flow was good from both, good, creative punches...but Elemental came wit the harder ones in the end. No hate, just elevate.