Elemental Soul vs Coopa Bang
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew/hate/dr Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feedin

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 07:58 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 07:37 PM.

Coopa Bang has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 07:40 PM.

Ima go ahead and snatch ya sould from ya bodie,
Seeing hoe you suck at rappin ill consider it as Me vs nobody,
So get prepared to have another loss to ya collection,
And if i screwed over on this voting
.....it'll look like another G.Bush election,
You being better than me is like KOBE gettin traded to da Heat....it aint gonna happen,
Since ya whole flow is writtin but aint "Comin out Hard" like ya pussie stabbin...

#1 line is suppose to be soul not sould....my bad i was typin fast....so if u can excuse the misspelling...again my fault

Your like Coopa from super mario,cept you can't spit flames,
You don't belong in this site's skin,like a leech who can't drain,
Your a damn hoe,just another stupid ass to strangle,
bANG'LE neva be 'sharp' even if i crushed his head to a 'triangle',
Ya rhymes are 'week'er than seven days,fake like plastic fruits,
This kid coop can't even rhyme better than doctor zoose

Voted For: Elemental Soul


Your like Coopa from super mario,cept you can't spit flames,
You don't belong in this site's skin,like a leech who can't drain,
^^haha good punch was funny
Your a damn hoe,just another stupid ass to strangle,
bANG'LE neva be 'sharp' even if i crushed his head to a 'triangle',
^^decent..coulda been worded better
Ya rhymes are 'week'er than seven days,fake like plastic fruits,
This kid coop can't even rhyme better than doctor zoose
^^lol nice punch
you had humerous punches.........good.............okay personal attempt.......ya structure was okay..........okay vocab......flow was good.......
7/10


Ima go ahead and snatch ya sould from ya bodie,
Seeing hoe you suck at rappin ill consider it as Me vs nobody,
^^weak weak punch
So get prepared to have another loss to ya collection,
And if i screwed over on this voting
.....it'll look like another G.Bush election,
^^okay punch...woulda been better if it was true
You being better than me is like KOBE gettin traded to da Heat....it aint gonna happen,
Since ya whole flow is writtin but aint "Comin out Hard" like ya pussie stabbin...
^^okay punch
decent punches.........horrible structure..........weak vocab.............no personals..........no multi's...........flow was okay..........come harder
4/10

return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163845

uppin #2....................

Voted For: Elemental Soul

voted for elemental

neither one of you used a multi in the whole verse.....that could have affected the outcome.....i voted for elemental because his verse was more creative...he played off of his name decent.....punches hit decent for both.....overall this was not a very good battle....coopa you had a good line or 2 but u also had some lines that were a little played.....no hate....just keep elevating.....

voted for elemental because of originality and playing off coops name

oh yea please return the favor with my battle vs. crossroads with an HONEST vote.......thanks

Voted For: Elemental Soul

Yo was hot but it would of been a tie if u aint hit that last punchline.HOLLA

Voted For: Elemental Soul

um this battle sucked ass...unless u just freeversed it
cuz there are to many "filler" lines=(linez that ryhme but
are corney and used cuz u cant think of nuttin betta)
even tho' it suked it waz about even...but i'll give ES my vote
because of the triangle line it hit more hard then any of cooppa's lines.....
vote=ES for having one hard hitting line....elevate homiez...
one peep my battles vrs.fredunlimited333 and Ebonicz

thanks for the votes.ill try to return the favors later.im type busy nam sayen
uppin

Voted For: Elemental Soul

coopa bang

Ima go ahead and snatch ya sould from ya bodie,
Seeing hoe you suck at rappin ill consider it as Me vs nobody,
(WEAK OPENING LINE, IT NEEDS TO BE MORE CREATIVE...NO DISS OR PUNCHES, JUST CHATTER...4/10)

So get prepared to have another loss to ya collection,
And if i screwed over on this voting
.....it'll look like another G.Bush election,
(PLAYED OUT...A WEAK DISS...COULDA BEEN MORE CREATIVE WITH THAT...4/10)

You being better than me is like KOBE gettin traded to da Heat....it aint gonna happen,
Since ya whole flow is writtin but aint "Comin out Hard" like ya pussie stabbin...
(WEAK CLOSER...YOUR BEST BAR, AND ITS NOT THAT GOOD...5/10)

AIGHT...NO HATE FAM...BUT YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT...YOU SEEM TO KNO HOW TO RHYME, NOW YOU NEED TO DIG DEEPER AND FIND SOME RAW AND UNCUT SHIT...LOL...GET CREATIVE...USE WORDS IN YOUR RHYMES THAT NO ONE ELSE DOES...GET A DICTIONARY OUT OR SUMTHIN...BUT YOUR VERSE WAS VERY WEAK FAM...IT HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES, DISSES, METAS...NOTHING...WORK ON THAT...~1~




ELEMENTAL SOUL

Your like Coopa from super mario,cept you can't spit flames,
You don't belong in this site's skin,like a leech who can't drain,
(DECENT OPENER...OKAY FLOW...DECENT PUNCHES...5/10)

Your a damn hoe,just another stupid ass to strangle,
bANG'LE neva be 'sharp' even if i crushed his head to a 'triangle',
(LOL...NOT 2 BAD...PUNCH AND MULTIE OKAY...CREATIVE...6/10)

Ya rhymes are 'week'er than seven days,fake like plastic fruits,
This kid coop can't even rhyme better than doctor zoose
(DECENT CLOSER...CREATIVITY OK...FLOW OK...6/10)

OK...YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT...WASNT ANYTHING 2 SPECIAL, BUT YOU CAME DECENT HERE...YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD, A LIL BIT CHOPPY...TOPICS GOOD...DECENT PUNCHES AND DISSES...A FEW MULTIES IN THERE...STRUCTURE GOOD...OVERALL IT WAS OKAY...LOL...ONLY THING I SUGGEST...JUST WRITE YOUR SHIT NORMAL...NONE OF THAT>>>>> bANG'LE AND 'triangle'....

VOTE ELEMENTAL SOUL