Ebonicz vs OptiKaL
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feedin off whoeva drops first

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 12-08-04 at 09:13 PM

Must drop verse in 145 minutes after check in.

OptiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 08:14 PM.

Ebonicz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 08:41 PM.

if optikal think he got a chance it all an ilusion
i got more advantage on him then the big L and tupac fusion
i will go on whit this punk and till i get sued for verbal aubsion
if he still got a shot then he better take it quick
cuz im fully load and im readdy to empty my clip
unless you wanna catch a sulg you better run
or youll be bleeding on the rug you life is done
see ill fuckup every thing you will ever love or charish
evan his dream to make it big will fuckin Parish
see i got aint the shit to audio so ill be text in ya
i got ya mind so boggled you be have'n dilexia
now that he all fucked up my word will be infectin ya

gave you 3 hours but u prolly need a month to write ya verse.....we all know ur ryhme gonna be played out if u diddnt try n bite it first//
literally i attak cuz u cant hak it wit my raps lyrically...
madda fac; u remind me off pizza hut wit no drivers
the way u lak's delivery//
U.......fuk's wit me?NAH u aint got the ability...to compere wut such a real emcee...who'z lines spark electricity to burn hiz competitors wit wordz so brilliantly//
yo' my punchlinez bloody ya mouth like if you were spittin glass...cept'ya spitz is wak,n breakin c.cd.'s be the only way this cat iz rippin traks//
keystylin n u still bout to die....the worst part iz u tried ya hardest while i diddnt have to try//

Voted For: OptiKaL

voted for optikal because.............

optikal....you had some nice mataphors in your verse....punchlines killed him....nice multis.....the only thing wrong with your verse was that your structure is fucked......work on that and you will be a very good battler....overall a nice verse.....u hit harder

ebonics.....your verse was kind of simple...no multis...no vocab....meta's.......it was a decent verse but those are some of the things you should consider working on....no hate...


i voted for optik because...punches hit harder...he had more multis...metaphores were there....and overall his whole verse was just a lot nicer.....no hate to either one of you....good battle....

well w/e as you can see i took me 10 minutes to wright this shit

Voted For: OptiKaL

flow: ebonic just cuz it flowed alot better off the toung
punches: optikal hes punches was alot harder and was more direct and raw...
creativeness: optikal cuz hes punches was original and hes verse wasnt basic or average all around preety good drop just fix ya structure......

vote: optikal

fa show im not use to this site yet thats y my structure iz fuked

up up and away lets get this ova with............/.

come on people i votwe on all the battlez up in here so return the favor

one last time fuka'z vote please..................

This was feedback posted for OptiKaL
 

just checkin da polls.........uppin dis for optikal.....

Voted For: OptiKaL

man this battle straight sucked. Flow was ebonics was off a little bit because of the 1 syllable rhymes you should mix it up with multis ya need to elevate. Optikal you were alrite nothing hard hitting but kept it decent.

ur ryhme gonna be played out if u diddnt try n bite it first

K.o............................................... .......