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<('.')> vs Elemental Soul
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-11-04 at 09:47 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
yo lets go....... accept this fast ok..
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<('.')> has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 09:48 PM.
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Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 09:57 PM.
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yo ima drop some shit now ok....
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yo kid you aint never ever gonna be ill///////////////
not even if you took the doping pill/////////////////// and still....you always gonna lack the skill//////////// you overcharge in wacknes and get electrivity bills// cause damn you just wack, and still clamp bitten crap/// time ta strap yo back with a missle and send you back..... ......to out of orbit....... all before you scored shit//// he aint wanna loose, but hes headint towards it....... ......... all he wants is wins but he cant afford it////// |
ya man i dropped..... so im waiting on you now man
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hurry up and drop man!
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This kid's a joke,his flow's basically dissin his shit,
Self-discriminating like ya mom callin u a son of a bitch, Your not creative or complex,you just think its unique, To scrample ya name to make a face that spits out a queef, Fuckin pussy, your better off doing a strip show, Cuz thats the only way u can get credit on a poll, Just flee from this site,you dumb dike,biten like a bug, You don't fit in,like a smurf converting into a blood, Your food nigga,just not edible,just let it go,u deaded hoe, What kind of emcee gives himself a name with no syllables, |
Voted For: Elemental Soul
EM....aight verse....much better than the symbol dude.....u had some punches....u just need to work on ur struct. and word. Symbol guy......wow....that was embarrassin.....u used extra "/" just to make it look structured.....pitiful.....work on every aspect of text batlin may'n \V/-EM yo elemental soul....since u prolly have more den 150 posts.....please return tha HONEST favor........http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164636 |
^aight thanks for the vote LOL@"symbol guy".....uppin
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Voted For: Elemental Soul
Elemental merked this kid totally. His flow rhymed better, sounded better, and had much better punches, vocab, and wording. |
Voted For: Elemental Soul
<('.')>: hmmm....well your obviously an alias just by looking at your sig....1st bar was weak.....as you may already know. 2nd bar was very played. 3rd bar was oddly done but I understood it.......meh....last bar was weak:) overall: 3/10 Elemental Soul: 1st bar was blah............slightly effective. 2nd bar was okay..nice personal but what the fuck is a queef? 3rd bar was ummmmmm................played and not that great at all. 4th bar was okay........final bar was..........wizack not even a punch in my opinion 5/10 vote: ES |
uppin............................................. .......................
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Voted For: Elemental Soul
Easy vote... punches - E.S. personals - E.S. multis - E.S. entertainment - E.S. structure - E.S. (face person get rid of the huge //// and ....., it messes it up and shit) E.S., killer openin... loved it... u KO'd this kid after just the opener 2 lines... V/ Elemental Soul |
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