MC Firetruck vs lil C.A.L.I
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-09-04 at 11:45 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 11:46 PM.

callin me a herb when u ask wats a strobe 1
jus go fuck yourself with your probe 2
bitch is new to rv runnin his mouth
rap like shit soundin like derty south
this bitch is wishing to shooting stars so i grabbed a uzi
now wat bitch i told u dont push me
cuz mc firetruck is a ho straight pussy
my lines are so hot u need a firetruck
you r a disgrace to rap u fucking suck
and if u do merk me its beginners luck

1 he asked wat a strobe is
2 a probe is a dildo

upping this people aight!!! :thumbup: honest votes!

see u signed off to pre write u faggot!! :nono: go choke a dick ho :nono:

^Fuck you bitch I went to sleep, why the fuck you think I made it a day to check? Unlike you I don't spend every waking moment on this site, so prepare...

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 04:48 PM.

I didn't try hard thinkin' up new shit to hit him with
'Cuz last time I murdered you with a 5 minute sitter, btich
You're ignorant, yeah, you were bound to get told
Keep callin' the Firetruck 'cuz ya hot breath is outta control
Hopped Empire's nuts, yeah I know you hate, tryin' to elevate?
Shit, the only thing you're ever over...is weight
Talk fake, you've never been killin' so stop it
Call Cali your brother 'cuz you're mad about the fact you're adopted
Go compensate for not eatin' MC's, get a snack, munch
Fightin's the closest you'll ever get to droppin' a fat punch

Voted For: MC Firetruck

Yo u was crzy lil cali needed to do better but you merked him fuck beginners luck u got that, return the favor and vote on my battle aginst NY's Finest. PLEASE BE HONEST.

Voted For: MC Firetruck

This was more than one sided.

MC Firetruck totally killed you and thats a fact, tehres not much else I can say to explain it.

This was feedback posted for lil C.A.L.I
 

cchecking it out...............................,...

Uppin' this for some more votes, shouldn't take long to close this KO...

Voted For: MC Firetruck

this bitch is wishing to shooting stars so i grabbed a uzi
now wat bitch i told u dont push me
cuz mc firetruck is a ho straight pussy
my lines are so hot u need a firetruck
you practically copied his punch. The first 3 lines don't even flow right.. and don't rhyme 3 lines in a battle

Keep callin' the Firetruck 'cuz ya hot breath is outta control
An OK punchline

Hopped Empire's nuts, yeah I know you hate, tryin' to elevate?
Shit, the only thing you're ever over...is weight
Another good punch

Go compensate for not eatin' MC's, get a snack, munch
Fightin's the closest you'll ever get to droppin' a fat punch
good internal rhyme

Overall:
flow truck
personals lil, but didn't hit hard
internals/multis truck
punches truck

Vote on my battle in my sig......................

Voted For: MC Firetruck

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to C.A.L.I flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, firetruck had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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I know its a lil weak but its ok
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