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The Art Of War(The Scribe)
Intro-ima start teachin niggas how to do this the right way
get back to the lesson of a poet/so let the class begin first on,grab a pen and paper take the caps off and spit the first thoughtz,this will be a picture u draw/ i get solatude under four walls,hit the page with emotions and force./ this is pain and life i need a blessin as i touch the cross/ many bitches(excuse me)many females got me soft/ no condom settin me up for something raw/ but now i come back more hardcore.like contra in minds lines store. the mission is simple,but to do it is hard/ fuckin mc's wana test ya barz/ threaten your life scars,they don't know im a shine in the starz/ by far the illest driven like speed racer cars/ i put myself in content of a glass jar i wanna break thru and hit the charts/ but instead get marked.but im the ruler i get deep in rhymes with and inches and yards(get it). who hatin on this,messure my disc,15 tracks of hard shit the truth with a gods gift,writting with a spiritual lift/ weak mc's like ya'll can't stand it,so sick boards gotta band it snatchin the text and open mic's like a lyrical bandit/ these niggas better vanish,im a negative and positve call me a doulbe standard. i got keys to enter doors like a lock smith,explode im wesson wordplay be the smith(smith n wesson)ya just say anthing like a snitch,bitch niggas can't wait to get rich/ rich can't wait to see SCRIBE but ya not feelin yet what im dealin wit, 97" became a poet,around the time B.I.G. died time to rise was the blueprint in my mind,but i had to wait for mines build with critical life lines,go thru more of a grind a gemeni sign but in my own eyes i tell the story here it lys got even colder when my grandmother died(rest in peace) fuck let me push this shit aside......(gime a few seconds) but over years i learned faster,how many styles do it take to catch ya/ never scared of the bible,cause revalations was my fav chapter/ to rip mc's i became a ghost like casper/mind of steel all hell against the people who wana draft us/ bring heat like volcanos,a musical dis-as-ter the x factor/ mc's need saved souls before cap-ture/ 4o cal of verse across the R.P.from me will blast ya/ (the art of war) Paintin the perfect picture,i kill mc's who can't keep this poet out they cen-ter/ can't go at me :nono: -scribe with the killer thumb and index fin-ger. fuck some niggas,you can't reach my DRASTIC MESSURES get left in the SHADOWS fuck ya text-ure weak mc's better graps together,become a brotherhood but still get smashed by words thick like leather/ im bad or better.only god can judge me don't get bladed up into feathers. (last notes) the poet is woke,bring death by poems burning like heat strokes red dot on my enemies,keep under the barrow and scope burry cowards under they smoke,(cuz the claim to spit fire) its hard to talk hard wit a slit thraot.ya niggas always wana quote. but read the lesson,ya defeat will be your lastnotes/ this was real ill.too hard for small minds. get back with replies.holla at me sin- the gift SCRIBE |
danm.......
this is R.I.S.E but i aint never really peep ya shit befor... this was hot... flow was good, topic was good, u stood on topic good, u painted a picture prefect.. vocab good, creativeness was good danm hot drop had me into this... 8.9 outta 10 keep'ing coming..... drop ya feed back on this........ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865 |
thx kid,much respect/will do
Holla Scribe |
to me that was betta than 8.9 that was mo like a 10/10 i was really feelin that shit..keep
em comin fo sure dog |
good lookin,much love and respect,just doin a poets work.
Holla The Scribe |
still uppin for feedback
Sin The Scribe |
ya'll niggas don't sleep on the best open mic yet.
Sin~ The Scribe |
Sawlright, Could Of Improved Structure...But Nice Vocab Keep Dropping That Ish.8/10. |
thx for the outlook on the structure,but thats how i drop my verses
its diff styles thats why i break it down...qoute me....how many styles do it take to catch ya?<<<<<< Sin The Scribe |
can't fade this out its too real
Sin The Scribe |
uppin for more feedback.DON'T SLEEP
Sin~ The Scribe |
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