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fredunlimited333 12-09-04 03:35 PM

fredunlimited333 vs Tha End
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 03:35 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 12-09-04 03:36 PM

fredunlimited333 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 03:36 PM.

System 12-09-04 03:46 PM

Tha End has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-09-04 03:46 PM.

fredunlimited333 12-09-04 04:00 PM

they say tha end's near ur near 2 ur fate near to ur death
how you set ur name to prove that there is no hope 4 u left
bitches stay in my corner cowards and pussys fleein with fear
you think your gangster sippin on a drink no harder other than root bear
who cares bout your death like jay's feelings of an an asmatic
breathe easy like you do when poppa tell u ta come git dick
faggots dont live long tha end is near for ur life
ur repulsive by appearance turned gay cuz u cant get u a wife
thats sad ur an internet gangster but a pussy in reality
its evident in ur style that everything ur spittin is false b

Tha End 12-09-04 04:01 PM

His versus are so slow and low profile
they cant be classified as truly mobile
your whole style needs to be sent to pimp my mind
cuz your spits are like a hooptie easy to find
spin and whirled this bitch into the abyss
gave him a day and a half his drop was still to incompetant to list
im ruthless i couldnt give a shit bout your uselessness
check it whenever i hit this bitch up with micro versus
he has to look up the words on lyco searches

OptiKaL 12-09-04 04:48 PM

Voted For: fredunlimited333

oh shit freddy u elevatin a lil bit decent drop...um
the End u had sum multi's that were kinda lame n thats
bout it....ur whole verse waz a filler which means u jus
say things to ryhme...while fred had a couple personal punches...and sum good simlies while the end had nuthin
vote=fred due to the ends lack off hard hitting punches,linez
and nothing 2 personal.....aye vote on my battlez fella'z
vrs.eboncz and u fred

Tha End 12-09-04 09:11 PM

uppin for votes...................................

Tha End 12-10-04 04:14 PM

uppin for votes....

Tha End 12-11-04 09:52 AM

uppin for some votes......

Die Hard 12-11-04 12:29 PM

Voted For: fredunlimited333

fred took this one... the verses overall were better. While tha end had better vocab, this one had more versatility to keep up throughout the whole verse.


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