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12. RDotGod Vs. 53. KOOL COL-B
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Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time 10 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck! |
check, werd
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Do that one more time and your out of the tourney sdizzle - F.I
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Yo...
It's like... When this kid bites, we see ya weak and suck Col-b jacks lines, that end up cheesy as fuck . . . Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument Spent a grip on ya rep... its something homos do... ...put up a big enough front for a playboy photo shoot Bound to lose, this round Dot'll fly through While giving you the chance to finally meet your idol I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best... ...predicted Top 4 in the tourney... ...you're not even Top 4 in this thread |
ur wrong my friend, THIS iz wut it's like...
Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/ i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/ i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/ and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/ but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/ cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/ tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/ i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/ cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/ and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN// EXPLINATIONS... Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/ i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/ (it explains itself) i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/ (he did a interview wit vango, and i did mo research on him than just read tha interview) and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/ (during my research i found out he haz alot of alias's) but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/ (sum people say that he's a legend) cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/ (people say that he's fallin off. people on september 11th fell of tha WTCs) tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/ i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/ (i sed hiz verse belongs in a garbage can. starvin people like hobos eat out of garbage cans, but if i wuz a hobo i woodnt even feed of hiz verse) cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/ (kinda like i woodnt eat it if i wuz a hobo cuz it wood have bites taken out of it. chrit wuz banned under a alias on RB fo bitting) and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN// (stilll wit tha eatin verse out of garbage shit. cuz if u eat food out of a garbage can, its kinda like recycling. ... Quote:
sarry fo tha long explination, but i just wanna make sure everybody understands my verse. if theres sumthin about it that u still dont understand, then tell me and i will explain it. werd |
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wen i posted it it fucked up my first bar. werd |
CALI's vote doesnt count what the fuck you stupid bitches keep voting and your out go read the thread important read or be banned next time i see you doing this your out and i dont care how much you cry about it - F.I
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basically rdotgod got this
he was much more wittier.............he had good witty punches.........had a pretty good personal at the end it was a good closer........ kool-b you had like two decen personals.........the sinner line and the fallin off line.....was decent...........but your structure was fucked.......and the rest of your verse was blahhh....... v/rdotgod for having better punches and metas |
ur wrong my friend, THIS iz wut it's like...Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/ stretched lines....no real punch i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/ and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/ pretty good but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/ cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/ ight personal tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/ i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/ no.. cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/ and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN// nope... Yo... It's like... When this kid bites, we see ya weak and suck Col-b jacks lines, that end up cheesy as fuck ehh decent . . . Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument pretty good Spent a grip on ya rep... its something homos do... ...put up a big enough front for a playboy photo shoot lol....nice...liked the concept Bound to lose, this round Dot'll fly through While giving you the chance to finally meet your idol self glorifcation mehh... I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best... ...predicted Top 4 in the tourney... ...you're not even Top 4 in this thread lol i liked this closer thats my break down...an di mean your structure you dont need to space your bars............and u dont need this //// we can all read and we know the rhyming words |
read th apost under my verse, i fixed my 1st bar. i didnt mean 2 have it streached like that.
tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/ i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/ no.. cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/ and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN// nope... smh. werd |
ok cook me and flow decided u freepost again ur out of the tourney
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Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent
And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best... ...predicted Top 4 in the tourney... ...you're not even Top 4 in this thread vs. Nothing of Kool Col-Bs.. Seriously.. And, Kool, dont even bitch.. You're wack. Vote - RdotGod |
Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/ NOt a punch... i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/ and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/ Ehh below average...couldve done good w/ the sinner reference but failed but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/ cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/ Ok......... tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/ i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/ ehhhh ok.........cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/ and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN// no... Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument ahahahahh Spent a grip on ya rep... its something homos do... ...put up a big enough front for a playboy photo shoot lol....nice concept Bound to lose, this round Dot'll fly through While giving you the chance to finally meet your idol Hyping yourself up... I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best... ...predicted Top 4 in the tourney... ...you're not even Top 4 in this thread Dope..... v/ RdotGod.....he came witty and with the dope punches while Kool had nothing... |
rdot for better structure and excellent personals
kool work on ur vocab and ur structure and personals for sure |
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