19. Indeph Vs. 46. BWALLakaILLNESS
 

Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!!

.....checkin in.....

checkin in
 

yo im checkin in and dropping my verse today kid

heres my verse
 

In depth from shot down, where only thing ill is that ill-in-noise...
Hi def Fram i surrond sound, sure any mean kill this kat and boys...
worked, red shirt, never gettin startin position..dont talk kid listen...
merked, ded dirt,kadaver setin embalmin maskon..cant walk head misson
caped, readied, indepth story cover Tom Brockhart, kids ending was at start...
maped, studied, couldnt walk in depth if was shark, kids blowing has no dart...
killed, cold meth tinkle whiped ass had no poepere, I make Ray right1 say pepsi
dilled, told,deaf =crippled fast had biology, darwin take ya out with society
Worked gay like Simmons Thunder Thighs, rape such ojsimpson wonderang why
Fucked rye, like prizons surrender guys, date butch go cousin pun de tang pie

its obvious he won.............

indeph better everythin ............., better structre...........better punches... better personals..........he came harder


b-wall had some strecthed lines.......punches really wrent connecting.......

v/indeph

no need to break this down

structure tie both were pretty good althoug i prefer indephs a little more
vocab inseph hands down
punches indeph he had a good personal bwall jsut cam corny really so vote indeph good job to both though

indeph :

your verse was good not great... a couple dope punches decent meta's and 1 good personal.. structure was good and it flowed pretty well....

fave bar :

please don't breed more herbs..doctors kill his baby..
though closest you get to fam..is if you still my avy..

the rest of your verse was just decent this stood out the most

overall : 6.5/10

BWALLakaILLNESS:

umm your verse was basically a open mic you never came directly at him... you beat around the bush too muh with your verses and your style is really gay... i could barely follow it... and some of it made no sense at all i got confused with what you were trying to say a couple times

fave bar: none

overall : 2.5/10

vote: indeph

odviously
 

call it a free post.....odvioulsy you guys dont get the flow because it was an audio like text thing directed at him like he was beside me to deep for you to understand i guess but thats ok :shoot: :shoot: :gfy: :gfy: :thefinger

ok....

here's the good and bad parts of both verses:

indeph

you under par like before a T-off..wait for elivation..
you would think with two names..you'd have a reputation..

clearly ya best line.... other rhymes were forced... almost all were pretty simple... no complexity... punches weren't really hitting too hard.... i believe you coulda come a lot better than this

bwall

only thing ill is that ill-in-noise...

nice line here but everything else was all over the place... i barely understood ya verse... punches neer connected... you failed to get at him effectively... you jumbled up all of your ideas and in the end you left me confused... maybe it was too complex for us and there may be some kind of meaning behind ya verse, but without explanations it's real hard to give you props for ya drop

v/ goes to indeph... better rhymes (though forced), attempt at punches