mainstream crap
 

i discourage wack rap expecially mianstream crap you fags could cracked by my semi automatic hand when it slaps these cats you punks think yer cool just cuz you got a spot on stage? well with my rage, ill beat you any day of the week and if you dont believe me, ask my homie rich ryhmes how many times ive eaten shitty mcs on the streets for sport its almost as many times as ive been dragged to court by a bitch for not paying child support, but i gives a fuck and ill slap a hoe right before she lays back down for some moe
i plan to dispose of the corrupt government officials by launching homemade c4 missiles and blow the shit out of em like monica lewinsky and ryhmes like 50's can out out my ass since their shitty , i used to give him props but never again because now he spits like he loves men and nobody can come with as much skill as i can since i come deeper than the klu klux klan from tenesee so if anyone wants to see me get in line cuz this time ill destroy my enemies by throwing them in a gas chamber with xiclon B in case you didnt know that death is nazi or you can get it in your own basement like that little ramsy girl who was only 4 just to let my enemies know im settling the score and mainstream rappers should get it in the back door cuz they sold themselves just like a whore

i guess i want some feedback since i dont do this much

topics been done a bit much..

fix the strcture don't write with paragraphs..

I like that u spent the time to do this though

if you want help IM me:Indeph11

NOT BAD BUT LET ME DROP THIS RIGH THERE HOMEY

My job is to slaughter and dissolve weak cats in water
Like Alka-seltzer then drink these weak stats that falter
Yummy in my tummy they go so you stay below me
Rushes on the block like water gushes from a rock see
So pure and crystalline secure with my pistol a brisk nine
Got a list of fine females on my Rolodex I have sex and kiss sometime