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For$akeN 12-09-04 09:03 PM

SPuLakeN Sickness Key-Style!
 
shit all of these fake ass hobos all over my mojo
fasho niggas be askin' for mo dough
but they get baked off bread, i don't care though
What say wet laked off said, I won't wear low
your bitch don't like you cuz your internet "connection" is slow
well, yea, fuck my girl, cuz I still got yo cuz to blow

FUCCCCCCKKKKK YOU!

shit kid I'll botox your mouth so you can rhyme with "phat" lips
Yo girl looks phat, when she down and suckin' my dick
keystyling with modems, and dude ya girl has straight up DSL
Dick suckin' lips, yo cuz has tits, that start to swell
cockiness! this is "E" motional sickness bitch, can't you tell?
but she'll grab a gun and blast more rounds at you than a boxing match
too bad I bust out in less than a round, and my balls she bends down to catch
but she "tag" your ass and flips it backwards and I throw her a "gat"
Oh, guess what? triple said he fucked her too, and slid into her cat
but the rest of the billie fan club strolls in a your left with a "scratch"
But when I'm alone wit yo cuz, dude, it's game set match
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Macca 12-09-04 09:08 PM

lol Nice. First part was dope and the rest was good. I do my colors like you. I mean every line is a different color. But whatever dope drop. Battle him.

intensify effect 12-09-04 09:20 PM

honestly i aint really like this that much....

flow was OK, creativeness i thought was lack'in....
word-play wasnt that great......

shit kid I'll botox your mouth so you can rhyme with "phat" lips
Yo girl looks phat, when she down and suckin' my dick
keystyling with modems, and dude ya girl has straight up DSL
Dick suckin' lips, yo cuz has tits, that start to swell
cockiness! this is "E" motional sickness bitch, can't you tell?

^^^ What the hell??? nah mag sorry i wasnt feeling this NO-HATE AT ALL CUZ I'VE SEEN WAY BETTER FROM U.......

6.0 outta 10

Artemis 12-09-04 09:29 PM

lol this was a Keystyle by me AND him. not jus him. But meh, it was a keystyle, shit ain't s'posed to be dope. up up upp. :)

intensify effect 12-09-04 09:33 PM

^^ nah dog dont get me mis-taken i aint say ya are wack or anythign i said this drop was weak and if its a key-style den i feel ya cuz shit be hard to key-style some dope-shit off the top....

and i aint know it was 2 different people...

so now that i re-evaluated this verse i can only give it a 5.5 outta 10....

and thats my honest opinon....

intensify effect 12-09-04 09:34 PM

wait wait wait.........

aka reckless??? do u be on F.S.com???

and my old name use to be REXLESS.....

intensify effect 12-09-04 09:43 PM

can ya drop honest feed back ont his........

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865

Artemis 12-10-04 06:50 PM

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Originally Posted by intensify effect
wait wait wait.........

aka reckless??? do u be on F.S.com???

and my old name use to be REXLESS.....

fs?................................


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