Personify vs † Gødž Ångël †
 

Battle Rules:

Personify vs. â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

4-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Alias Votes (any crew member)
No Hopeful votes. (people tryin out for your crew)
good luck.

px

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-14-04 at 09:23 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

aight its gonna take me a while to post my verse. i got a ton of shit to do before xmas. but i will post. px

â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 05:07 PM.

Persony this little animal, Feed him some visibility to be shown.
You have to post your ideas on a site just for them to be known,
I go to 50th bridge to get cherrished by my little minion officers,
You get stepped on and sometimes fly like little grass hoppers,
I am like a reading teacher, but remain skipping over you lines,
Kids appraise me for not testing your skills for you cant rhyme.
I have to have a microscope to see the structure of your point,
If you want to join my crew, your fam needs to depart just to join.

I like mah verse.... Dont know how its gon do.... but oh well.. Good luck dawg....

Peace~

Uppin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sry bout that....^^ Lol......

Dude ...... post your verse ASAP... ok?...
Peace~

Personify has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 05:24 PM.

I guess at these times good help really is hard to find. (Exp 6)

Exp 1- In Zeke's and WC's battle against EF he said they were better.
Exp 2- petter: to pet, or someone who pets an animal, pussy=cat, mad word play :thumbup:
Exp 3- His sn for AIM is Lilrapperboy9292
Exp 4- Asked where to find gangsta avatars
Exp 5- his old name wuz logistic (means symbolic logic)
Exp 6- he got KOd by Legend, his own member.

Vote Honest Or Not At All

px

^^sry bout the confusin structure. when u see a ( stop readin as a line.

This was feedback posted for Personify
 

good drop Godz Angel. good luck

uppin^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

this was pretty weak battle but i like GA's verse better. It was flowin alot better and had some attempts at weak punches just work on the creativity. Personify's verse was too cluttered and didnt really flow all that well. U need more hard hitting punches or multies at least.
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You gotta explain your votes more..........

Uppin~

Voted For: Personify

Godz Angel: This wasn't good as what I thought it would be, had nice flow though.

Persony this little animal, Feed him some visibility to be shown.
You have to post your ideas on a site just for them to be known,
I go to 50th bridge to get cherrished by my little minion officers,
You get stepped on and sometimes fly like little grass hoppers,
I am like a reading teacher, but remain skipping over you lines,
Kids appraise me for not testing your skills for you cant rhyme.
I have to have a microscope to see the structure of your point,
If you want to join my crew, your fam needs to depart just to join.

Personify's verse:Nice punches and personals. I see that someone has been doing their research.

Vote: Personify


why waste are time with this battle youve already admitted we're better (Exp 1)
respond to botty threads cuz only pussy you seen, all done is petter (Exp 2)
Ima provide discretion because this professions for men, let this be a lesson (Exp 3)
Stop askin questions and admit I am superior while I piss out my urine. (Exp 4)
Verbally i'll rip your spine like books at a public school,
"Reform" your cranium with verbal rhymes like D-1-2
Cant understand word syllables so ill make “logistic� signs (Exp 5)
I guess at these times good help really is hard to find. (Exp 6)

thanx for the honest vote. vote will be returned. uppin for more votes^^^^^^