quick diss
nigga u need to quit dissin stop twisitin my spittin
quit bein jealous it hurts me it hurts me to see sumone whose so envyious i know my punches are continueous but god damn give it a rest just admit it kid im tha best tha rest cant test this my rhymes is golden like piss make a list of thangs that rhyme and in time ur lyrics will be fine tha replies that u get back r weak tweak ur vocab coz nigga it seem like im runnin a tab i hit ya chest harder than PCP coz u cant see me dog r u lonely do u need me it seems like you do coz u love talkn to me i tried endin this beef but u kept comin back like hairs in my ass crack my thug mentaility will put u back into reality for now im done ive made my point o yea fuck u and fucc detroit |
flow was kinda weak.....
punches was where??? diss'es was ya strong point.... word-play wasnt ya strong-point... all around weak drop.... 3.0 |
well ya kno thats y i titled it QUICK DISS
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^^^ i aint hate'in on u dogs and i aint say u sucked.....
i said this drop was weak mang... dont take it to the heart just elevate N make my comment motovate u mang... turn that fire into a sick-song u feel me........ |
drop feed back on my oepn mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865
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okay man...stop
no really, STOP
your only hurtin yoself with this complete garbage. i believe i said dis on yo other thread, retire.....2/10. lucky im a nice nigga and i didnt take that "fuck detroit" easily, i'll let that slide. . . . maybe rappin aint yo thing man. try singin some beef my way. and if there is a problem. solve it yoself cuz "BEEF vol.2" was my last cut in this shit. im just talkin to u niggaz now. grow up nigga |
lol o so now u wanna bite on wut i say to u..lol fuckin lil kid man..o ya by tha way..................FUCK DETROIT MUTHAFUCKA
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Damn kid, no offense but u gotta work on sum stuff
Up the vocab and punchlines U gettin ya point across very easy, thas good, but try and get it across in a different way, make people think about it for a while Just keep spittin and u'll get the hang of it. No hard feelings, keep postin |
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hey hey hey........ i like the detroit pistons..... and eminem.... they cool..... but NYC is the place to be......... no beef just repp'in where im from..... |
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