Psyco vs Lil C
 

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-[P-S-A]- V/S VIOLENT TYPE

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Check in by: 12-13-04 at 11:52 AM

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Psyco has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 12:13 PM.

I could take baby steps showing you how dude's torn
Cause I'm rippin this pussy like a fifteen pound newborn

I'd pull you along for this but dude likes the pushing
Cause even his avi shows he thinks hes tupac but really a pussy

He Values all his shares he thinks this win is in stock
But we all know that dilusions the first symptom of Shock

Don't even show my worst line will rip half of your shit
Thinking you're football player but you can't even tackle your own spit

so how meny people you going to get beat by this week
cause i see that you gettin beat by Bizzy the RV bully

now at the moment you 0-1
but give it a week and it will be for sure 0-3

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 07:56 AM.

Look
career statistics is nothin, have this kid re-tire quicka than the Michelin man (1)
lines for simpled minded,you couldn't spit a line of fire if u was stationed over in Afghanistan (2)
i ain't talkin about basketball but this kid stay takin rim~shots(3)
willin to bet you handle more joysticks than game cubes and Xbox(4)
rewind the lines in my verse~spit my verse and you cursed(5)
so you winnin this battle is all make-up like we dissected a purse(6)
end up actin a jerk, i leave you listenin to birds that chirp(7)
wit a mic i'll leave you dead in the studio like ROC's Dirt McGirt(8)
a picture this picture i pitcha, make sho you holdin ya flash(9)
after i win i'll show you were you messed up like the ghost of Christmas past(10)
actin like you actually could win~a stick to the script(11)
Since its close to Christmas i got spirit so i'll wrap this battle up quick(12)
Ayo i get to penetratin ya loss column like grandmas panties(13)
I'll leave u fucked up like Elmer Fudd did bambi's family(14)
Lets recount the odds of you beaten Lil C~there A.R'n't M.A.N.I(15)
Be for real, with ya album sales you couldn't break change for pennies(16)
dyslexia reader than i letchu interpret i commit REDRUM on tracks(17)
read that back and kids a start to realize that the truth is back(18)

Explanations
1.Michelin man is symbol of tires
2.people with dyslexia(or however you spell it) sometimes look at a word and it could seem backwards to them(example:NOW-WON) so redrum backwards is murder

This was feedback posted for Psyco
 

man if i had to choose i would have to say pysco has it sry lil \c

Voted For: Psyco

psyco took this one pretty easily....

psyco had more multis in his verse....his punches hit harder....he had a couple decent personals.....thats why im voting for him

lil c.....practice using multis...and look into the tutorials and get with some nice personals and shit....no hate...keep elevating

return favor with my battle vs. terror2005 and spektikul

uppin for votes yall uppin for votes

Voted For: Psyco

Weak battle..pysco practically took this one even tho u both need upgrade more...
but psycohad the punches, structure, flow, & vocabon this piece...Lil C..ur drop wasnt all that good..ur punches werent that hard hittin or creative either..structure needs improving and ur flow fell..overall elevate more tho

RTF PsYcO

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uppin i was gone but now im back and better then ever

Yall Uppin

uppin this shit for votes yall

man you guys suck ass i can tell ya that