for all these kids in the rb. pep and learn sumptin
 

embrace unity


this peice is deicated to dime, varentao, monkey poet, psycko22, synickle, da gyrl remarqabl, and last not but defintly not least the non active Baby Gurl68.
and 2 anyone else that doesnt come to the site just to start shit, peace.

Good dedication babyboi,
glad to see u still on RB :)
Miss u ...

keep doin ur thang ...

pz xXx DiMe

so powerful for such a short piece got ur point across well stay livin

thanx ya 2 and danja yeah im gonn keep living. cause what are my other choices death. and thanx dime for the support. peace out.

joey

hmmm....liked it Joey...could feel ya emotions....speaking a good few truths there for sure....

....got no time for hating....keeping my stance on the basics of life - its all good (well to a certain extent)....

....respect...

rite on varentao appreciatte taking time out of yo day to peep my stuff. and yeah in a way this had emotion, but only because theres a plain site message to it. stay up. peace.

joey

WUT ABOUT ME....?? LOL LOL LMAO LOL LOL

*feels special... she was dedicated to....* awesome peice you have here... even though it was short, it held as much message and emotion as if it were a regular sized poem... and the message is a strong one that people should learn... i cant pick ne fave lines cuz they are all meaningful...thanks again for teh dedication... keep it flowin

short but deep...im feelin wutcha sayin. keep 'em comin
one

also dedicated to sin. yeah rite. lol. but thanx monkey poet nice 2 see a visting my stuff again. and papeswifey thanx for peepin my stuff. stay up.

joey

IS it because im so wack that im not deddicated to this MASTERPIECE.....LOL




nice piece, well structured, vocab a lil scratchy, simple but got the point across GOOD JOB ,

pz , respect

thanx foe peepin my stuff blias, sorry that i didnt post your name, but i didnt want to have the dedication list bigger then the actual poem.

uppin

What about me? What about me?

Actually, forget about me. And about Raven. I'm pretty sure this was the first peice of yours I read. Judging by the title "pep and learn sumptin" I figured you were gonna right something to start shit about how be better and crap. How suprised I am to see that's the complete opposite you wrote.

Cool.

Mo-mentai.

thanx Necro for the reply. and yeah his peice is intended to teach people that i could braw with ya all, but i'd rather use my skill to build, and i think alot of other kids in this site should look into these same ideas. peace out.
joey