Mentally Ill vs Acronym
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

PSA VS V.T

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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 12-13-04 at 04:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win

Acronym has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-10-04 11:14 PM.

Mentally Ill has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 12:06 AM.

yo look..

i'm sharp so i'll go grab a cutter, alone u ain't bold, phat, or butter,
its so sad but brother, u only win awards in a collab wit others

drastically meausrez already merked you so how do you expect to beat me
im throwin more punches then ali, ill lyrically slam you, smash ya head to ya knee

I pound ya grill n fist ya mandible I'll leave ya armed to the teeth
as I jive to the rhythm n send faint murmurs out from ya heart on ya sleeve

wanna fuck wit me i ? expect a loss thats what i fuckin gurantee
the system should already be fuckin changin your record to one-and-three

** thats my verse i fucked up the structure on my last post **

A's worthless..fucks on ya mind?..ill leave ya cerebelum hurtin..
my presence urkin,u a bitch..leave this pussy open like an overzealous virgin..
ur in PSA cuz no other crew wanted you..gassed like ya flow is wonderful..
in jail i bet niggas be fuckin you..so this faggots cut short like a tax deductible..
talk sit im clutchin tha wesson..MI's crushin from pressure..
A's verse like breast feeding..takes no skill just sucking & effort..

...........................uppin.................. .......

This was feedback posted for Acronym
 

chekin poollls homie.......i tink u jus took it tho on da real....

This was feedback posted for Mentally Ill
 

oo-shit nice verse dogs i think u most def got this hands down......

plus im just check'in polls but u def won this....

This was feedback posted for Acronym
 

just checkin polls

uppin..................dont sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

uppin lets get some votes............................

this isnt for crews nemore its for records.. UPPIN

Voted For: Acronym

Both verses were nice.....maj you had good punches and good personals....your structure was okay...and atempted wordply were okay....and i liked you vocab.....mentally...you had a overall okay verse...okay punches...not the best with personals....kinda played....and your structure was off..and so was ya flow....overall i think majestic...took it in my eyes.....v/majestic....~1~

This was feedback posted for Acronym
 

loookin at the stats... (i know this is majestic but on this name i cant see the score so dont ban me)