Newbie who needs some help
 

yo wattup fammo im looking for some help..
im new and im an alrite emcee i just got a few problems ive encountered.

1)what is rhyme pattern??
2)can u throw in short bars cuz i see alot of kats on the net do it..
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^^somethig like that..

3) and when im writing i seem to not figure out a rhythm to my shit can some one tell me or help me understand wat needs to be done..???

and does all ya stuff have to rhyme at the end of erry bar??
and can u have stuff that dont rhyme in some parts
eg.

iT was CrueLblOOd...FaM tryeD ta teLL these fake faGGots-
he said "mastA DA SCIENCE great MCs donT PANicK"-
AND i stayed PerfecteN my talenT like brooklyns finnest-
Twisted / KAOTIC mINDS make da perfect Alliance-

SO i COPPED my AAdvance,- No contest for CliP artists-
LOjiKK mOE KREATivE wit ganGA haCks like ron ARtesT-
GiveN'em BADLUCK, ruNNen thrU they emptY squads-
hARD knUcKz in Badland...muthaFuK MD....GOD-

I bruise niggUHZ egOS wita reign of terror-
while snuffen MonsterZ ina cocaine sweatshirt-

mY stylEZ off the waLL, the one and only LOne ElemenT-
iN CyPHA(s).. yaLL more or less cloned EMineMZ-
i beeN PT on the neT.... fulltime like MNS-
and down ta back this esse wit guns on INS-

yaLL dont make sense like whiTES wiT africaN names-
and u aint a Nemesis niggUH forget about dah game-
these nigGUhz talk shiT but its useless..So fruitless-
people be hoppen from my dick ta hambone dueces..u used ta..-
WorshiP this Born kiNG, not a nICE gui, I'll shoot ya-
and give ya GhosT an X-zA ExaM str8 from lUciFER-
MAKE ya deatH an EXPO, let's GO P's-SREWED-
ATMOS 7 times likely to spiT DEVI-ISH lyrikal kUnG-fU-
..................PEACE

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plz help me out with this its an emergency

hmm it all usual depend's on your personnal style. There isnt to much wrong with your bar's. drop some open mic's. wait for the feed.
chec out the tutorial's. they have alot of usefull info in them.

yea that drop is alrite but i just want some help with the other stuff

1)what is rhyme pattern??
2)can u throw in short bars cuz i see alot of kats on the net do it..
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^^somethig like that..

3) and when im writing i seem to not figure out a rhythm to my shit can some one tell me or help me understand wat needs to be done..???

and does all ya stuff have to rhyme at the end of erry bar??
and can u have stuff that dont rhyme in some parts

can u help

rhyme pattern is how your writin gyour rhyme's.

for instance..
......................... choke
............................................smoke
.......................behold
............................................sold

^^^ This is a simple rhyme pattern..kepping your bar's the same to help with the flow.


............................. coincide
...............................................go in side
........................flowing tide
................................stow and hide

^^these are simple multible's.
your bar length's should stay even. short bar's ussually fuck your flow up.. so try keep them a reasonable length.
once again it all depend's on yoru personnal style of writing.

muti is actually like this


scrap your frame ... damn your lame


its just basically starting it and then seperating it into 2 parts for one line... rhyme the last word of each peace of the line and that is a simple multi you can get more complex with 2 sylabol words and so on and such forth

yeh those are also multi's.^^