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Detrimental 12-11-04 02:50 AM

Together Forever
 
(Hook)
I'm not writin this to kiss up or sound cheesey
Emotions is strong it's hard controlin these feelings
It's hard dealing with them i know we have our fights
But pictures and love songs only show our good times

I'm not tryin to sound weak or anything but you're amazing
You drive me crazy it's hard to stay me
Cuz i don't want you to think bad of me
It aint sad to see how glad you had me
The day that's past me the one you said i love you
You have my heart my love in ya hands i trust you
Won't drop them forget them n leave me
You mean everything to me believe me
I never had somethin like this
When i'm with you it's hard to fight bliss
Cuz you this special girl who only can keep me happy
When i think of you all it is is love over lapping
We always laughing having good times but we still fight
I know i'm the only one who can dry ya eyes
Stop ya tears make you happy again
Don't ever worry about me leavin you you're mine till the end
Besides my girl you've always been my friend who cared
You always had my back i can't remember a time you wasn't there
Shared your thoughts gave me help stopped depression
I've admired you so long i regret havin feelings kept in
You're my love my life, baby, woman, n friend
Promise i'll have your heart till the very end

(Hook)
I'm not writin this to kiss up or sound cheesey
Emotions is strong it's hard controlin these feelings
It's hard dealing with them i know we have our fights
But pictures and love songs only show our good times

There are other girls with good looks but can't compare to you
And i know that there's other dudes that stare at you
But you chose me n i chose you and that's where fate led us
You don't even know how many songs i actually have wrote for you along with love lettas
That i neva shown you i look at you in many other ways then you think
Personality, looks, trust, compatibility are all links
To you n what we have is true no bull shit
N to explain my feelings to you is somethin i know that aint foolish
You hit the soft spot n sensitive side of me
Other dudes think that's pussy some girls do too but try to see
My heart is guiding me to write these words and do the things i do
N the things i say are far from lies they're true
You know you're everything to me and you know i love you
When i first met you i swore that day i saw a halo above you
I trust you your names is carved n scared in my heart for life
I thirst n starve for your love every single night
I could hold you right in my arms forever
We never had a song this one's ours to remind us of bein together
Your love warms me like a sweater my stomach twist n turns
I insist you come with me cuz my heart burns
My love is you you've been introduced to my crazy world
This song for you and you only my baby girl

(Hook)
I'm not writin this to kiss up or sound cheesey
Emotions is strong it's hard controlin these feelings
It's hard dealing with them i know we have our fights
But pictures and love songs only show our good times

Your wish is granted an early gift for a Merry Christmas
My gift from you is just you and them very kisses
You give to me without you i wouldn't be who i am today
Your mom and sister moved to Texas and for me you stayed
I love you more than i can explain and more than you know
When your mom was movin i told you to go
But you said no you wanna be with me
You say you love me so much but what do you see?
What makes you want to be with me more than anything
Why for me would you give up everything?
I dunno why you would but from that i realize
That you really do love me there's no one above you in my eyes
I visualize us bein together till we die untill death
If life was takin from me would you live heartless breaths?
Even if i left into the next life would you stay mine?
Or would you find someone else over all this time?
I aint lyin you're the only one i want
Even if you were takin from me my love is never gone
Cuz nothin is ever like that first love you have
The relationships not the same it's easier to get mad
But forget all that this your song from me
I have no love to seek cuz i've found mine n finders keep
I Love You

(Hook)
I'm not writin this to kiss up or sound cheesey
Emotions is strong it's hard controlin these feelings
It's hard dealing with them i know we have our fights
But pictures and love songs only show our good times

Detrimental 12-11-04 06:05 PM

any one wanna wanna crit this or what?


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