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Graffiti Artist Pt.2
it’d be a poster to me, but some bitched “its all over the street!”
kid plugged into his creative outlet ‘n shocked both the extremes// pussy politicians would push for prison…probably 20 years flat to penalize a picture perfect paintin the public paused to peer at?// ‘its pollution!’ parlor moms pose arguments, just to harp ‘n mock ‘n then pitch their partially-smoked parliaments in the parkin-lot// he aint purposely persuade packs of people to the particular game they just found a wall, ‘n like an alliteration, all started the same// pummeled with persecution…the painters were going thru a test they were in their right mind, but most people only use their left// so everything the artists posted was attacked ‘n called into focus whats poetic justice? before the graffiti the walls went unnoticed// media told the masses: its peer pressure parents, scold their asses they’d follow him off a bridge, the day he starts taggin overpasses// how trend setting was he? some people were swept off their feet! he didnt just paint the town red… he painted it ready to read// cuz dammit it wasnt damage! why’d anyone brand him a bandit? he could manage to see an artistic side on the back of a canvass// he cant even admit he did this, gets dismissed like sun-shines are making a painting he cant claim, like a gift with an unsigned card// to this day hes a name that isnt reppin a face, but u bet its okay …its easier to see someone’s soul without their flesh in the way// so the poet in him’ll keep going forever, and hopes eternities late even though his intellectual property doesnt have a security gate// this story’s not false… but i can easily explain how i planned it this board was the wall, i was the he, and the name was dynamic// vet to sensation, i wrote in present tense durin my text elevation so my every piece would be an easy read for the next generation// my shit’ll live- in the future read one or two spits, it’ll prove this cuz behind the new shit theres always a blue print on how to do it// someday a cat’ll say my ideas are old…he wasnt there at the start ‘n if he went backwards, what he calls an artifact was in fact a art// some tried to copy my paintings, i wont say vengeance is sweet but the most important prints they traced, were left with my feet// we’re all graffiti artists! wit a made-up name to decoy a real sense and with a creativity that’s priceless to the point you feel spent// i’ll be gone by day break, if im remembered i got ya’ll to thank the name was nasdaq, …will it paint a picture or will you draw a blank? ....thanks for reading.... |
I simply love it! Both part 1 and part 2...Was def feeling your flow, vocab was straight fire...but that wordplay! Damn...dope! Whoa man...that last verse where you "explained" everything...
we’re all graffiti artists! wit a made-up name to decoy a real sense and with a creativity that’s priceless to the point you feel spent ^oh so true... One of the best things i've read here so far...it was long but worth the read! This stuff came straight from the heart...H-O-T DQ, number 1 fan hehe... |
Dope, Dawg.......... Its Eyvon, By The Way.... Keep Up Ya Writing... U Do Really Good Poetry
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Ha My Nikka ............shit Was Good..............up Ya Vocab Though
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once again...hotness cutty. just hotness.
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This was one of the best I have EVER read. I really liked these lines^^ Dawg you gotta write more its definitely worth reading. |
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