GKillaz05 vs lil C.A.L.I
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-14-04 at 01:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 01:04 PM.

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-11-04 01:09 PM.

Lil Cali stop runnin' your mouth before your dead in an alley...
Been knocked out so many you stutter like Muhammad Ali...
Cant write a line... your pen-is worn from smackin' it...
Cant get a bitch... your lil Cock Always Lackin' it....
Trackin your record seen you havnt lost to a guy with skill...
Will you win this battle... NAH, your just a myth still....
I kill fake MC's stop tryna be down with my crew...
Can drop 3 more tryouts and they still wont accept you...*

* - he has tried out for Killah Bwoys crew twice, and they didnt let him in. Then I didnt even drop a tryout and they accepted me.

2nd line should read much.. not many... good luck man

look at u callin ppl a herbie steppin to me is like a destruction derby
yeah i said fuck ya crewand i still aint scared to say it to YOU
ill merk ya crew and dat pussy ass faggot drew
fuck a country that represents a flag cuz im battlein a pussy whos a canadian fag
if your u r so good y u set it up for 20 and up to vote
cuz ur so sry you can't get anyone to care wat ya wrote
the reason why u smoke weed is cuz of the disabilitys cuz ill ko u makin u have hostilities
your punches are missing like u swingin on ali
ask your self do u really want some of cali

no i havent i tried out a grip ago man!! fake personal! :thumbup:

Voted For: GKillaz05

Gkillaz took this battle hands down.. Definately had a better feel to it, as well as versatility, flows, vocab, and punches

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...64&page=1&pp=15
what this then?.. lol.. callin' it a fake personal.. check yaself son.

Voted For: GKillaz05

GKillaz:
Dude Came Harder With Better WordPlay, Nice Punches Personals Was Decent The Whole FLow Just Came Out Round..Structure Well Done I Like You Vacobulary Nice Going Kid I Saw Little Multis In There No Metas But It's Cool Nuff....8/10

LIL C.A.L.I.:
Again You Elivating But Just Start Your Skill Up A Little More, Punches Wasnt Hard Nuff Vocab Was To Basic Basically Work On You Vocab And Structure You'll Be Good And Add Multis Still And Personals, Flow Was Pretty Good.....7/10

G Killaz Return The Favor Link In Signature

Voted For: GKillaz05

Lil Cali:
look at u callin ppl a herbie steppin to me is like a destruction derby
yeah i said fuck ya crewand i still aint scared to say it to YOU
1/10????????

ill merk ya crew and dat pussy ass faggot drew
fuck a country that represents a flag cuz im battlein a pussy
2/10..????

whos a canadian fag
if your u r so good y u set it up for 20 and up to vote
cuz ur so sry you can't get anyone to care wat ya wrote
3/10??????

the reason why u smoke weed is cuz of the disabilitys cuz ill ko u makin u have hostilities
your punches are missing like u swingin on ali
ask your self do u really want some of cali
0/10....wtf...omg

ok man you need to learn the art called rap...ok plain and simple..NO Hate..elevate

GKillaz..:
Lil Cali stop runnin' your mouth before your dead in an alley...
Been knocked out so many you stutter like Muhammad Ali...
6/10

Cant write a line... your pen-is worn from smackin' it...
Cant get a bitch... your lil Cock Always Lackin' it....
5/10

Trackin your record seen you havnt lost to a guy with skill...
Will you win this battle... NAH, your just a myth still....
8/10

I kill fake MC's stop tryna be down with my crew...
Can drop 3 more tryouts and they still wont accept you...*
6/10

overall G took this he had way mor eof a complexity to his verse and everythign else like punches and wordplay.....

This was feedback posted for lil C.A.L.I
 

hard hittin punches than gkillaz. overrall pretty good battle

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Voted For: GKillaz05

not much personals over here but twice better than lil cali..

Lil cali:the reason why u smoke weed is cuz of the disabilitys cuz ill ko u makin u have hostilities...can you make it worst?anyway...nice vobac both of you...and lil cali...you lil bitch...sto hating canada bitch

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