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Keith Moon 12-11-04 01:53 PM

Premanition vs Elemental Soul
 
...30-50 lines...
...Check-ins due Monday...
...Verse due Wednesday...
...Topic: Exile
...Votes due Friday/Saturday...
...Two votes required...
...No biting, cheating, or d/r...
...Have fun...Don't complain too much...

Elemental Soul 12-11-04 02:23 PM

Soul Check.....

Premanition 12-12-04 04:55 AM

check

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Keith Moon 12-13-04 09:20 PM

Since Elemental has been banned you advance....

Premanition 12-14-04 02:42 AM

o.k

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Dabatos 12-16-04 11:15 PM

no u do not advance

The MC is takin his place

Premanition 12-17-04 12:55 PM

need an extension or im afraid i can't drop, mad mad busy, its gonna be sunday if you'll allow it, n remember i thought i was through til a minute ago so i haven't planned anything....

i'll drop on sunday if u alrite wiv that if not im sorry but i can't drop...

pz

The MC 12-17-04 04:40 PM

ok....this is my second check in. im Elemental Soul ok people.......now....the topic has to get assigned so we can start this shit up...... oh and by the way.........
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Soul Check

The MC 12-18-04 12:37 AM

Blood is dripping from the blade of life's sword,
Splashing on the innocent,punishment poured,
Heavy legs slow you down,a sea filled with salt,
What goes around,comes around,our own fault,
This country is spoiled,but my people r starving,
Inconcievable,unbelievable,how da evil is carving,
Leaving dents and smearing threats on our God,
Paused, fading into the fog, sinking into the bog,
Reality equals tragedy for families in poverty,
We will suffer in torment, during this odysey,
Autopsey performed after the demise of justice,
Found in the body of redemption,false success,
Cup holder, pennies being thrown at his face,
How can we have ties, when there is no lace,
Depressed, but this time, i shall defeat fear,
I can not cry any more, i ran out of my tears,
Clock speeds for judgement day,no more gold,
U.S. exile,revenge is a dish best served cold,
See im rich compared to the poverty in Ecuador,
And i live in the projects,lives filled with metafores,
That's why Ecuador is my niche,my damn zone,
Poisened domes converted into souls all alone,
Brasil, Peru, and Colombia took land from me,
We were half the size of south america,lovely,
Its funny,that my country's used as a ransom,
Not mentioning Ecuador,in their spanish anthem,
We got the Galapagos Islands,charles darwin's lab,
And our capital is in the middle of Earth,so its sad,
How we get no recognition,til they use us for media,
Miss universe contest,like if we lacked criteria,
That's y im hoping to move to my country,b4 exile,
Cuz the U.S. has it coming to them,bodies piled,
Meditated for the ressurection of hell sedated,
Ground zero reiterated,even escaladed,elevated,
To the point where george orwell's 1984 comes true,
But even worse of a curse,merciless guns drew,
Like paintings under water,decelerating technology,
Acelerating phycology,brain washing philosophy,
Atrocities in cities,beheadings in dungeons below,
Canabalism produced by the hells expunging the flow,
Glass shattered in front of ya face while ya eyes are opened,
Blinding your opulence and wealth,no more hopen,
Holocaust all over again,taking showers with gas,
That shreds your skin and brings u back to the past,
Blacks will get lashed,foots cut off in the process,
Gaining unnecessary knowledge,shoes polished,
Invasion of projects,revolutionary like che gevara,
Difference is that the blood drips blue down ya cara,
"Porfabor para",no response,u are not ready for this,
Exile coming soon,we as the people,do not exist,

Dabatos 12-18-04 01:10 AM

extension till sunday

Premanition 12-19-04 06:45 AM

im sorry but i ain't gonna time for this, damn i've never no showed a tourney....shit sorry bout this dab & chase and elemental i no its annoyin wen ya key a verse n then the other person don't drop but imma tryin to sell my car today n buy a new one n i ain't gonna get time...

elemental nice drop n gud luck wiv the rest of this....

once again sorry

pz

Keith Moon 12-20-04 12:29 PM

your out then I guess...pz

I. Mind 12-20-04 02:18 PM

Elemental Soul wins

Closed

-I. Mind


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