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Inevitable Desire Feat Me & Triple N
Aight this track was Jpolls actually Am posting it for em. 3rd guy suppose to be Phenom but he is bussy as hell so i added my nizo Triple Nizle Its an emotional song please bare it wit...us...lol Tittled: "Inevitable Desire" www.soundclick.com/keyroguemusic.htm :thumbup: |
I see ur into emotional --ish DV...hey man, I'm the gay guy, i'm supposed to be the emotional one...LOL...j/k
ne way i wasn't feelin the voice at the beginning...sort of a cross between Britney Spears and a chipmunk but the words were good...just couldn't tell if it was a sample sped up or someone who actually sounded like tha ummm...flow was good at the start...the transition between the 1st verse and the chorus coulda been smoother with ad libs or something mixing was good 2nd cat...flow was nice...rode the beat well Triple's voice mixed with the soft tone of the chorus created an interesting contrast not bad Triple's flow was good...delivery was good...but needed a softer voice to blend in better with the tone of the track...be tender...LOL j/k umm...this was good 7.5-8/10 stay up 1 |
yea....im feelin this right here....i like the beat...pretty good...lyrics were good....Dv just improve quality...like buy a new mic:thumbup:
the first dude Jpoll...lyrics coulda been betta tho...and vocals seemed kinda low... Triple...lol...i can see how the emotion can go both ways on this track...but damn yo...u coulda had a more mellow voice....lyrics were still good tho...just dont be so rough wit a touchin track...lol... it was good tho...and i dont give number ratin... |
this was good, wasnt feel'n da hook
triple N seemed outta place lol, his voice is way different than the other 2, but its all good. Nice lyrics by all. |
1-Jpoll
2nd-Me 3rd-Triplenizlle Forgat to add that..lol But yea thnx |
this a remix on a jedi mind beat...its a sick sample also...feedback please...good job triple, nice job dv...let's get some feed...
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^^^ thought i noticed that from one of my cds from my collection!
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Oh first 2, you guys sounded pretty average altho you had nice lyrics, best voice was last man, sound a little like Xzibit or something
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uppin let's get some comments hmm...jpolls first track in a while...actually I recording this about 3 months ago, btu still comments please
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Hey, good track fellas,
jpoll~you started off good, your flow was on point, but i heard where you stop and start again, try to mix it better, but nice job,lyrics were great..havent heard you in awhile Deadly~nice emotion man, always, good lyrics as well, still heard some pops but it got better Triple~nice jumpoff into your verse...very hard sounding, and emotional...damn, some peeps are telling you to tone it down,but i think the power in your voice sounds great... oh and i love the hook..gotta learn how to do that shit with vocals...anyways, dope track, i enjoyed it..1 |
good track
dv y is ur production so bad u need help with that lol lots of pops |
decent track good vocals and feeling liked it alottt
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good track, this was really tight...good job
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the songs pretty dope lets get a couple more replies....
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Yea i suck wut can i say..lol Jnizzle...word this shit took like 4 months to finish it..lol |
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