Back at Ya....lil keystyle....
 

It's been so long, I'm not sure if I can spit/
But that's alright, I ain't scurred by the fit/
Of rage, that Satan put me through/
Sittn in the Jail cell, but now you know I'm through/
No mas gang-bangn/
No mas cat slangn/
God showed me I got more to live for/
Un amigo showed me the WORD, I bout hit the floor/
Now let me bust in Espanol/
Tu sabes que Dios es mi hombre/
Pero cuando usted pregunta algunos, ellos dicen no se/
Did ya get it, or is it up over your head/
All I know, is I'm bout to go lay in my bed/
So now I'm askn for some respect from ya'll/
Who knows, I might even cruise up to the mall

What ya'll think? Whackness? It's a keystyle so I get some slack...haha

nice work, you said you haven't been spitting in a while also, so more slack there, peace kid don't forget to check that ish...peace nice work

it was coo lil piece all u need to do is elevate on yo vocab...check my peice 2 dawg holla...

i need to elevate

It Was Straight
Though It All Depends On How Long You Been Spittn ?

"So now I'm askn for some respect from ya'll/
Who knows, I might even cruise up to the mall/"

was a bit of a poor ending to an alright peice, the spanish was a nice touch, but the flow was ok though and the whole thing was a bit short to really mean anything, I didnt really feel it.