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Straight Foolin!!!
(verse 1) ayo... im comin harder than yo momma did in her home movies im done wit slappin niggaz, im just gone go grab tha tooley thinkin you big? dat aint new to me i done beat tha shit outta niggaz 300 pounds or more silly and you cant beat me or join me nigga so stop askin i'll kill hitmen hired over me to show im a better marksman bet you didnt know i was yo pops man yeah, it was a long ass line but i got there, say hi to daddy man broker than folk eatin sardines outta tin cans sleepin wit a bitch every night just for tha sex man nigga im a lil too hard to touch, im dangerous cant decifer if i wanna bust in yo girl navel or on her butt critical thinkin got my mind bent, cant stay on track sometimes i possess lil niggaz on some of my tracks im a sick sick bastard, rap made me this way been spittin since out tha womb, bitch get out my way! (hook) huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz you cant stop me, how can you? its SR$ actin a fool! im huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz WHAT THA FUCK YOU GONE DO? im actin a straight fool!!! ~repeat 2x~ (verse 2) nigga look in tha sky, its a bird, its a plane nope it aint neither, its me blastin bazooka bombs, goin insane nothin can knock me down mayn, my peddistall is up there (up where, i dont see it) LOOK BITCH, ITS UP THERE!!! believe me nigga dont it look like i tell tha truth (no) well fuck you too then slut, wait till im in tha booth i gone spit tha illest truth even tha lines about you and you cant do shit about it can you? (no, BOO-HOO-HOO) yeah cry yo eyes out cuz in a minute im cuttin em out tha sockets puttin dots on yo forhead like you was drinkin indian piss will i ever get sick of this? NO my own CD is on my wish list i dick my own rips, no need for another ass to kiss (ha-ha) i've been better than you in everything else so whats tha cause of us, tryin to kill each other over rappin is it just becuz, im tha illest teen in tha D you heard spittin since Obie? or maybe its cuz SR$ dont believe what you write, i need you to show me and if it aint that then what is it nigga, tell me, please tell me im gettin angry, your not gonna like it when im angry yeah...like i thought, now shove yo fuckin pride up yo ass what am i doin? this dont make since, im throwin this verse in tha trash (hook) huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz you cant stop me, how can you? its SR$ actin a fool! im huntin dudez...grabbin toolz...bustin nutz...in yo foodz WHAT THA FUCK YOU GONE DO? im actin a straight fool!!! ~repeat 2x~ (talkin) yeah...its dat nigga SR$ BITCH...srtaight from yo momz mouth...so when she spit you know im comin right?...yeah...Dem PlayBoiz 4life nigga...shoutoutz to K-GUTTA, e-roc, T-Rez, death aven, Pusha G, C-Row and my nigga duck i see yall...yeah...'05 to infinite...nigga...ha-ha-ha-ha...DETROIT CITY NIGGA!!! |
lookin 4 mad feedback on this one yall...DONT SLEEP ON THA KID!!!
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yall already know dat dis shit is HOT. i give it at least a 8/10 or better. get at me yall damn...
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c'mon...whats really hood wit yall?
DONT SLEEP |
it was iight...
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i thought it was kinda weak
3.5/10 u gots some shit ta work on |
^^^well.....WHAT DO I HAVE TO WORK ON?????
i mean, this shit is just somethin i threw together in 20min. |
na your shits good, i like the style i just said it needs work cause you gave yourself an 8/10, but its straight, keep up the good work n give me some feedback
kid knockout |
^^^oh good lookin. i only gave myself a rating cuz in tha flow i said "i dick my own rips, no need for another ass to kiss" but yeah. jus tryin to prove my own point...fuck it
okay...i need more feedback from yall. quit lookin if you aint gone write shit!!! |
get at me.......
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on this shit u are straight foolin
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^^^umm K, that was lame
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i thought it was sry. you need more of a rhyme scheme. and make it flow a lil more.
you had some good lyrics so keep it up. ~1~ |
oh yeah if you wanna battle i'll teach you all about it!
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