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Make Your Mark
like martin luther king,ive got a dream
where everybodys themslves and creme weed flows like a stream fuck a glock, its time ta think outside the box for a start with 6 billion differnet minds its time ta find a way to make your mark if we all project our dope qualities for better in the world and respect each other equally from every boy to girl who knows how far we could go, how good it could be we could all cop a rollz an a milli salary every country in the world could splurge an be free an povertys in the past, learnin bout it in history we could all experience shit you thought youd never see like when i look in the mirror an amaze myself lyrically everyones got potential, from poorest to high credentials work out your mental an be surprised how high your mind il send you so if two heads together are said to be better than one we should divide borders, combine countries, subtract guns add peace to the streets, detox all the fiens instead of spendin green on pills we could kill a disease kid knockout |
:thumbup: its straight.....i gives it a 7/10. 4real good use of vocab kid...could have more structure though PS... if you can. can you go back to my shit and tell me what i need to work on plz. ~1~ |
decent flow... work on ya structure a lil bit... and try to extend ya lines a lil' but besides that you were good..
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its alright.......................but work on your structure
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