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Kstroyer 07-10-02 04:05 PM

compensating
 
compensating for the loss at hand i stand high but my soul is still crawling on the beach sand/ getting dirty getting pinched by black lobsters and stepped on by white kids/ told to leave places just cuz of the color of my skin/ my closest kin wiped out at age sweet 16/ now theres sorrows on sorrows packed in my heart like sardines/ let somebody else cross me without a gun/ blazing the heater b4 they kill my only son/ i aint having no more pain/ i cant stand by no longer never wanna see my blood die again/ so i stay vilagent to protect what is mine/ malign in my approach and refined in the techniques of time/ i wont be fooled by words or fake flattery from within/ charm gets u dead just ask my patrilineal kin/

OnSlaught 07-10-02 04:11 PM

That was nice, good flow and nice rhymes, and may he rest in Peace if that's true

Peace

Kstroyer 07-10-02 04:13 PM

thx yo
and it was my girl cousin

Kstroyer 07-11-02 09:10 AM

uppin

Kstroyer 07-11-02 02:35 PM

uppin

Kstroyer 07-11-02 02:40 PM

uppin come on drop some feedback

ViSiOnZz 07-11-02 02:46 PM

tha best part was how this flowed i liked this keep it up....check out some of my work.....

Kstroyer 07-11-02 02:47 PM

thx yo

Xeno 07-11-02 02:51 PM

nice piece i was feelin the flow
and it was on some real shit so thats always a plus
sorry to hear about your loss i know how that shit feels

but stay up man and keep spittin

Kstroyer 07-11-02 03:16 PM

thx yo

Kstroyer 07-12-02 03:21 PM

uppin

Kstroyer 07-15-02 08:38 AM

uppin

Kstroyer 07-15-02 03:57 PM

uppin


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