Lawless (Hs) vs Tarik Donovan
 

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Tarik Donovan has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 04:59 PM.

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:28 PM.

it's ironic how he pussy and can't find it where it be no price/
knowin' damn well he couldn't get blown if he was casino dice/

my rhymes are heavy like comedy punchlines from eddie/
i'm battlin' you? i'll fucc around a burn a mic(Mike Jackson) like pepsi catch me/

Tarik like to fake like he seen obscene things/
when the only tyme he could spit sumtin toxic was from a bottle of mean green/

I show no love for any man approachin' me/
naw betta yet.. he couldn't spit fresh if he was a can of popari/

ain't no way lil' T is meltin me/
his fuccin brain must be slower then the elderly/

I ain't a newbie you can't remove me wit failure/
only time he seen 'a clip' was on a movie trailer/

i'ma go head and finish em Mr. T your ended/
and ya image is now smaller then a premature infant/

this bitch lawless been here since august but still is wack...
he tries to hide it but I ain't liein' man no tryin' cuz it is fact...
cant use a personal on him cuz he has no personality...
hes a robot speaking jiberish its shit... hoe tot with split anatomy...
he couldn't be wacker if he changed his name to sinner...
no way he'd be a winner in a battle cuz he gets ate for dinner...
By another guy... why... he's gayer than gay porn...
get your head severed like jesus when he got suck by thorn...
and I ain't bein' demonic i smoke herbs like you like chronic...
you suck dicks while I shoot off more bricks than the supersonics...
Next time you fuckin' step up to face tarik donovan...
your momma will be cryin' tryin' to pick out your coffin...

I murdered him... my rhyme got out of hand... I meant to go easy..lol
oh well...

Voted For: Tarik Donovan

Lawless:
it's ironic how he pussy and can't find it where it be no price/
knowin' damn well he couldn't get blown if he was casino dice/

my rhymes are heavy like comedy punchlines from eddie/
i'm battlin' you? i'll fucc around a burn a mic(Mike Jackson) like pepsi catch me/
2/10

Tarik like to fake like he seen obscene things/
when the only tyme he could spit sumtin toxic was from a bottle of mean green/
4/10

I show no love for any man approachin' me/
naw betta yet.. he couldn't spit fresh if he was a can of popari/
2/10

ain't no way lil' T is meltin me/
his fuccin brain must be slower then the elderly/
5/10

I ain't a newbie you can't remove me wit failure/
only time he seen 'a clip' was on a movie trailer/
2/10

i'ma go head and finish em Mr. T your ended/
and ya image is now smaller then a premature infant/
1/10

Tarik:
this bitch lawless been here since august but still is wack...
he tries to hide it but I ain't liein' man no tryin' cuz it is fact...
4/10

cant use a personal on him cuz he has no personality...
hes a robot speaking jiberish its shit... hoe tot with split anatomy...
6/10

he couldn't be wacker if he changed his name to sinner...
no way he'd be a winner in a battle cuz he gets ate for dinner...
3/10

By another guy... why... he's gayer than gay porn...
get your head severed like jesus when he got suck by thorn...
4/10

and I ain't bein' demonic i smoke herbs like you like chronic...
you suck dicks while I shoot off more bricks than the supersonics...
5/10

Next time you fuckin' step up to face tarik donovan...
your momma will be cryin' tryin' to pick out your coffin...
7/10

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it is what is I underestimated you my nigga... good flow there

thanks for the vote...

for the record.... when I came in august I was representin' RA we was gon challenge this site to a Ultimate battle.... but whateva' I jus came back today and I only had what 2 posts when I came and I been on here since 1 o clock battlin' but whateva....

thanks for the vote parallel

appreciated.......

Voted For: Tarik Donovan

Easy Easy win for This Tarik guy.

Not the best verse I'v seen from him, and thast bein nice, but he pretty much killled you dude.

Lawless, that was the biggest bunch of randomness I ever seen, you had no punches, no nothing really, you may aswell have written wack 100 times over.

Obvious Win.

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damn cuz.... I didn't know you felt that way tward me?

n e wayz I don't give a fucc thanks fa ya vote... looks like LAW gon take his first....

I need it....
I boast too much
n e ways thanks for the comments I didn't think my shit was AWFUL damn... I guess I gotta elevate....

yeah i thought you had one man good battle tho....

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

ight battle but lawless took it good verse by both but lawless had betta punches n flow um......tarik pick up on yo punches u had ight ones but dey was kinda played elevate both

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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

ay homie dat was hard,dem punches,were actually punches

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