Lawless (Hs) vs The MC
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
no feeding
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 05:40 PM

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The MC has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:11 PM.

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 05:16 PM.

this bitch nigga can't match what I do wit the rhyme/
I'll lay bows to this nigga dome like a beauty salon/

MC you ain't reel nigga quit the frontin'/
hoe my guns spit similar to jukes by Mike Vick you gon be missin sumtin'/

I got steel that a light ya grill/
this faggot couldn't get 'a hit' if he had Mike Tyson's skills/

nigga I faced way illa folk/
when you couldn't 'be hot' if you was in a sauna wit a chinchilla coat/

yea you quick wit the crossover but the mak hurt they handles/
and this so called MC couldn't 'blow' if it was his birthday candles/

i'm tryin to figure out is it war the man spittin'/
keep talkin' shit and end up 'shot' like a Ford Transmission/
nigga

Fucka,you can't be serious,you about to get hit-man,
The only way u'll be fly,is if i put u next to a fucken fan,
Lawless?, well it doesn't count if you break rules online,
You don't make cents,like bums with "i want beer" signs,
I don't need multis to solve this simple minus equation,
Your like the food at white castle,cept no ones craven,

u went way over the line limit.i said lines not bars.u should lose automatically

oh shit my bad... can you match it?
I got like 3 otha battles and I swear I didn't see that shit...
can you match it... if not i'll cut it..

cut it off cuz i dont feel like making more rhymes at the moment,im not in the rapping mood.

nigga I faced way illa folk/
when you couldn't 'be hot' if you was in a sauna wit a chinchilla coat/

yea you quick wit the crossover but the mak hurt they handles/
and this so called MC couldn't 'blow' if it was his birthday candles/

i'm tryin to figure out is it war the man spittin'/
keep talkin' shit and end up 'shot' like a Ford Transmission/
nigga

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Lawless took this one easily... Definately better personals, wordplay, flow, and versatility. It just seemed more complex with better rhymes as well.

yea... I should have taken it easy on em'
thanks for the vote...
I think i'ma retire from newbie battles I wanna be able to spit more and have competition although I'm new to this site... I'm yet to be beaten n e where but w/e good try kidd...

we need some feedback on this battle... let's do this ppl

Voted For: The MC

The MC
nice punches, they were hard and landed
decent flow, nice structure, and okay vocab
didnt see no wp, but overall decent drop.....

Lawless (Hs)
decent punches, flow was chopped, structure was blah
vocab was the only thing good from you, elevate more
then u'll start winnin battles...

lmao im a newbie? i wasnt even tryin nigga,,,,,this isnt my first user name. my overall net record is somewhere around 40 wins and like 15 losses. so dont call ME the newbie

w/e nigga..... I'm not newbie either so the flows are mutual iight.... n e ways ain't lookin' for beef i'm lookin' for battles....
my bad for puttin that n e wayz cause I boast way too much I expect to take a loss on this site it has potential.....
but besides that... let's jus get feedback