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compensating for the loss at hand i stand high but my soul is still crawling on the beach sand/ getting dirty getting pinched by black lobsters and stepped on by white kids/ told to leave places just cuz of the color of my skin/ my closest kin wiped out at age sweet 16/ now theres sorrows on sorrows packed in my heart like sardines/ let somebody else cross me without a gun/ blazing the heater b4 they kill my only son/ i aint having no more pain/ i cant stand by no longer never wanna see my blood die again/ so i stay vilagent to protect what is mine/ malign in my approach and refined in the techniques of time/ i wont be fooled by words or fake flattery from within/ charm gets u dead just ask my patrilineal kin/
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very powerful deep and hard hitting piece.....
....all else i can say is...i feel what you saying for sure...hard and deep...respect... |
thx yo
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^ Fav Lines ^ Welcome to RB - PS, Stay active! U got much talent .. This was a short poem but had much depth to it .. raw .. Head up Pz |
thx yo
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depth,,, in this joint mad nice feelin this...
stay reppin uno |
truly an extremly raw and emotional peice... and i loved it... the flow was good and the vocab was awesome, but the emotion was strong and hard hitting.. i loved the message and everything... keep it flownin
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thx yo
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uppin
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