for Esteban/2versatile
 

It's hard for me to trust wit so much goin on'
it's crazy when I know I ain't the only cute chick wit a thong'
this is why i'm writin this song to let u know what the deal is'
I'm sure u can kinda relate somehow u gotta feel this'
trust is a two way thing but sometimes I feel it's not there'
sometimes ur kinda like cancer leavin me wit no hair'
callin ur phone and shit nigga i kno it's not ILL'
but real is real nigga and for real that bitch needs to be killed'
I was on some crazy shit when I heard a voice opposite of mine'
fuck it maybe ur not my soul mate are u sendin me a sign'
faggot I hate u why r u even part of me'
fuck Ja rule Love is pain can't u see'
so i'm writtin u this joint full of emotions'
so if u really love me show me ur full of devotion'

Esteban,
I know some of the lines are a little corny, but I wrote this in less than 5 minutes. I just had to find a way to express our situation, so just bare with me and remember its my raw feelings.

"c"

pretty good i don't like the length i just got in to it and it was over besides that i thought it was a dope peice

Yea this was a nice piece too.. I like this better than the last one.. obviously it could improve, but im sure you know that... try using some more meta's and similies..

I was feelin this bar
"trust is a two way thing but sometimes I feel it's not there'
sometimes ur kinda like cancer leavin me wit no hair' "

keep Rhymin and Elevatin... 1...

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yo this joint is not C.F.C it's (C of 2Versatile)

Yo let me get some more responses!

(C) 2Versatile

mr. uni-verse
 

I TOTALLY AGREE WITH YOU "C" TRUST IS A 2 WAY STREET BUT SOME TIMES YOU SHOULD LOOK AT IT FROM A GUYS POINT OF VIEW. YOU MIGHT NOT BE THE ONLY CUTIE IN A THONG, BUT ITS A WHOLE LOT EASIER FOR A CUTIE IN A THONG TO GET LAID THEN IT IS FOR ANY GUY. SOWE FEEL WE HAVE MORE TO WORRY ABOUT SOME TIMES.AND IF HE HAS BEEN HURT IN THE PAST, EVEN IF HE WANTS TO TRUST YOU OR SAYS HE DOES DEEP DOWN INSIDE HE REMEMBERS THE PAIN FORM THE ONE GIRL WHOM HE DID TRUST THAT HURT HIM.SO HE MIGHT HAVE THAT TO DEAL WITH ALSO AND THE ONLY ONE THAT CAN FIX THAT IS YOU AND TIME DOING WAHT YOU CAN DO TO EASE HIS MIND AND JUST BE PATIENT AND IN TIME, IF ITS MENT TO BE, YOU AND HIM, IT WILL BE NOTHING CAN STOP IT NO MATTER WHAT, DESTINY CANT BE STOPED.