lil C.A.L.I vs ILL-iterit
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-12-04 at 08:52 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

ILL-iterit has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 07:53 PM.

lil C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-04 07:58 PM.

Mastermind, delivering A devastating description,
Of how I'm killin this cat and proving my prediction
My techniques are Tighter than a DareDevils butt-cheeks
Replying to this will take Ya longer than a hibernating mammal sleeps
Get out ya dictionary, cuz some words may be hard to understand;
U'll soon find out that I get more W's than the Wu-Tang clan
So "Protect Ya Neck" and I'm accepting your Apologies
I spit COLDER shit than a toilet in the Rockies
No Doubt, this dude's rhyme skillz are straight up pathetic
From me, U'll be catchin more shotz than a fuckin Diabetic

fuckin bitch sayin that i suck last time i called u out u duck
u need to shut your mouth when i tell u to fuckin cluck
im gonna merk you fo free fuck u over like john ghotti
lines are packin so much heat im gonna 'set it off'
u dick ridin so much u know every time I sneeze or cough
actin tough with just 1 win cuz ill rip u to pieces like da berlin
quit being such a herb for i beat u to the curb causin a damestik disturb
sayin u ill my punches leavin holes in your grill cauzin blood to spill
cuz i was born to merk and born to kill
introduced to the game taken ppls records down to fufill

yo lets get some votes in here, ain't nobody wanna vote no more, yo listen afterya read just click on who ya thinks better and that'll help us out, thanks

yo can we get some votes please............................................ ....................................

c'mon people, lets get some votes, after u read jus say who ya like better, lets go lets go

Voted For: ILL-iterit



fuckin bitch sayin that i suck last time i called u out u duck
u need to shut your mouth when i tell u to fuckin cluck
im gonna merk you fo free fuck u over like john ghotti
lines are packin so much heat im gonna 'set it off'
u dick ridin so much u know every time I sneeze or cough
actin tough with just 1 win cuz ill rip u to pieces like da berlin
quit being such a herb for i beat u to the curb causin a damestik disturb
sayin u ill my punches leavin holes in your grill cauzin blood to spill
cuz i was born to merk and born to kill
introduced to the game taken ppls records down to fufill
^^^^^^^^^^^^ IT WAS AN OK VERSE SOME PLAYED OUT PUNCHES SOME WERE GOOD U HAD MULTI'Z







Mastermind, delivering A devastating description,
Of how I'm killin this cat and proving my prediction
My techniques are Tighter than a DareDevils butt-cheeks
Replying to this will take Ya longer than a hibernating mammal sleeps
Get out ya dictionary, cuz some words may be hard to understand;
U'll soon find out that I get more W's than the Wu-Tang clan
So "Protect Ya Neck" and I'm accepting your Apologies
I spit COLDER shit than a toilet in the Rockies
No Doubt, this dude's rhyme skillz are straight up pathetic
From me, U'll be catchin more shotz than a fuckin Diabetic
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES, NICE WORDPLAY (WU-TANG CLAN LINE)


OVERALL= THIS IS AN BALANCE BATTLE BOTH OF YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCES.... FLOW WAS GOOD, ILL ITERIT U HAD GOOD PUNCHEDS NICE WORDPLAYS , LIL CALI U HAD SOME PLAYED OUT PUNCHES SOME WERE GOOD, MULTI'Z AT THE END WERE GOOD. BUT I GOTS TO GO WITH THE PERSON THAT HAD LESS=PLAYED OUT PUNCHES AND THATS ILL ITERIT, LIL CALI USE CREATIVE PUNCES SOME WERE PLAYED OUT, SOME WERE GOOD BUT IT DIDNT HIT MUCH HARDER

PEACE

Voted For: ILL-iterit

ILL-iterit took this one hands down.... I'm so tired of lil Cali using the "herb" line in every battle. ILL's was som much tighter with better punches, vocab, and wordplay. This was a sleeper hit against the Lil' Boy...
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Voted For: ILL-iterit


ILL - ...decent drop, structure was okay, flow was nice w/ the
structure, vocab was aight, overall u had a nice drop. but tho
ur punches could've been a little harder, but thats me, & ur
new to this site *and probably freestyling*, but anyway..nice
drop tho.. 6/10

lil - punches were blah, decent structure, an 'okay' flow,
vocab was decent too, could've tookin this one if ur punches
were hard & landed, but not in this round u didn't tho, elevate
more...

uppin for votes............................................. .....

checkin the polls.................................

Voted For: ILL-iterit

yo punches had mo' color, mah favorite
'Mastermind, delivering A devastating description,
Of how I'm killin this cat and proving my prediction'
dat was hot both structures were good but calis creativity
lacked and so on you know

*return da fava*

Voted For: ILL-iterit

Both need serious elevation...lil C.A.L.I, ya verse was just plain wack man...no punches, flow and structure was fucked...ILL, ya verse wasnt that hard either...No creative punches...Damn I hate these simple ass little battles...But, the punches you threw were better than anything in lil cali's verse, so you get my vote...Both of yall need to elevate alot tho...1