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ViSiOnZz 07-10-02 06:12 PM

No Message....
 
I'm a emcee full of logic a mic philosifer/
mind has tha strength of a 16 wheeler goin backwardz/
crazier then a colombin kid commin back for more/
rap game overlord f*ck haterz i use them for feul i keep them stored/
devil manifesting my body thats y i carved 666 in my skin with sword/
humanity hatez me i doubt it can take much more/
hypocrisy is all i know since i was born/
ignorance to me is pride if u know what u say an explain what for/
or maybe i have no purpose an of life im jus bored/
anger is like in a calories in my body it's stored/
lord take this weight of me it's like my spines ready to crack like a thin board/
an answer this if a tru thug cry is he hard anymore/
i'm not a preist or a son of devil i jus think harder then most really none on my level/
god hold me as i enter my mind an meet myself/........

sK!LLz 07-10-02 06:28 PM

tight shit nigga

i see that your "skillz" dont decrease lol





yo remember the crew battle

you have to send me the verse before midnight thursday which is tomorrow

oh and get on AIM

ViSiOnZz 07-10-02 06:32 PM

thx dawg......i can't get on aim im outta town in florida....but i'll get u verse soon as i can...uppin

sK!LLz 07-10-02 06:39 PM

aight send it to my email address

alex.stayhot@verizon.net

aight

Halo 07-10-02 10:15 PM

Ayo i felt this drop...Would have liked it to be longer...But its still nice...100

LACK OF LOGIC 07-10-02 10:19 PM

TO SHORT BUT DEF LEATHEL

RhetoriX 07-11-02 08:22 AM

This is nice, im feeling it... I like the wordplay and concept involved, theres some powerful lines it was strong.. Sometimes found the rhyme scheme slightly choppy, work on your multies and internal rhymes... The vocab was good, balanced in places and you used a good knowledge... Wordplay was your strongest point, there were some good similes and punches and you come well in this... Keep spitting and elevating, it is a bit short thats a minor thing, look forward to seeing more of your work...

Peez...

ViSiOnZz 07-11-02 02:08 PM

thx ya'll uppin.........

ViSiOnZz 07-11-02 02:57 PM

uppin

ViSiOnZz 07-13-02 01:32 PM

uppin dam

ViSiOnZz 07-16-02 02:11 PM

uppin........


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