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i want feedback on this...its HOT
just a quickie i found in one of my flow books...hope yall like...I WANT MAJOR FEEDBACK ON THIS...cuz im tryin to find my style...4real SR$, you can tell he's nice Want enough dough to get my cell iced; tote guns bigger than a hitman price Droppin' mad bombs Fuck safety, keep the gat on; .44 Taurus in my Phat Farm Sucker, please, it's the D-P - fuckin' -Bs They back puffin' trees' got your girl suckin' on these Fool, be strapped, no way you can do me, black Let the tooley clap, put one in your bourgeois hat Put your brains in your fuckin lap Like Air Max, I'm everywhere you be at, settin' booby traps Holy shit! $ the black Moby Dick! Yo, he's sick! Walk out the door, he get a, "Blow me, bitch!" Fuck around, my crew might base You should quit this and go back to school like Ma$e Cuz at rap you suck, I'll have to clap you fucks Make my octopus wrap you up, nigga talk to my nuts |
ay da structure was uuuhhh,but madd props nigga
fareal |
good lookin my nig. alright...let me hear (read lol) more feed...i need it!
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i dont see shit else...c'mon
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Straight up for real it was aight!! better than straight foolin! it had betta rhyme technique!!
and quit takin shit to seriously! ~1~ |
it was cool for a freestyle but u need to battle
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