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..Lyrical.. vs JaeBurnz354
Battle Rules:
10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 K.O. rule Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-14-04 at 07:36 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
JaeBurnz354 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 07:37 PM.
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My lyrical skill is ill...Got you feeling sick...Cramped up standing still/
My rhymes can cripple you...Poor little you...I spit with force that leave ripples too/ You trash, plain ol ass...So my verse whipe you...On the toilet I'm just like you/ I stink, yes that you...I ain't think you had no skill...Who would of knew/ Please work on ya craft...You flat like sodas in fact...It's plain to see by seeing ya stats/ |
..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 07:43 PM.
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Be real dude, or I’ll blow three shells through ya head
Compared 2 your skills, I’m Raisin Bran... “to scoops ahead” Draw a bar with this thread & separate Lyrical from this wack herb... Gone far to get some head but d/ring only elevates you back words! This kids weak....struggling just to battle hard, I dismantle stars You'll get convicted....on a bike, you just cant ‘handle bars’ You need to go faster ...rhyme so slow I think you're brain dead.... Ur wordplays trash there... I don’t have to mention it...it's plain said So the time has come to rip your ass like a dysfunctional sex toy And leave your candy ass the one herb that brings all men joy* *= Almond Joy…it’s a candy bar |
Voted For: ..Lyrical..
Lyrical Took this one obviously.... I definately was feeling the flow and structure more on this one, and it definately had better punches and wordplay... Please return the favor @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165710 |
Voted For: ..Lyrical..
Nice verse. I liked the closer a lot and the opener was aight. Nice structure and punches. Still room to elevate, but you lyrically abused him... |
uppin this....
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..
ok....i thought lyrical took this one pretty easily...... open was nice 2nd bar....lol...humor...and a hard punch 3rd bar...nice meta..punch 4th....decent 5th....nice...didnt get it till i read the explanation...then laughed....decent jae..... you should work on your structure a lot....it was hard to read....you had some decent lines.. 1st bar...kinda self glorifying...no 2nd....another self glorifying bar...no 3rd....actually tried to throw a punch...better...but still wasnt feelin it 4th....no 5th...prolly best one cuz you attempted a personal... i voted for lyrical because his whole verse was just on another level.....punches hit harder...structure was better...just a nicer verse....no hate to jae....good battle |
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