Death vs JaeBurnz354
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 k.o. rule

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-14-04 at 07:48 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.


DQ'ed.. did not meet 10 line minimum

JaeBurnz354 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 07:49 PM.

Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 07:51 PM.

In death how do you speak...How do you preach...Of that spoke in the streets/
My rhymes rip through ya soul...Ya flow on rocky roads...Mine flow like pee in snow/
Real easy believe me...I mute you out like t.v.'s...No glasses, so how do you see me/
I'm on another pedastule...I rock and roll...IN lyrically bring the heavy metal to you/

Damn I only did four bars DaMn it all good th0....

you dont wana step to me man/
ill put a red dot on this nigga like a 7-Up can/

ill melt this nigga like smores/
you get no respect like Bush at tha Source awards/

you like a tape and i got bullets to "eject"/
you know im tha best when i done fryed all the rest/

you cant win, do only thing you can "beat" is your meat/
when you have a fever is da only time you come close to my heat/

ill leave ya body over an open fire to roast/
ya need to elevate cuz ya flow needs more work than Michael Jacksons nose/

on this rhyming highway you need to make a U turn/
cuz beside ya name(JaeBurnz354) ya verse also crashed and burned/

votes.......................

Damn u did 6 bars but it all good woRd up hmm let get the votes in

hey yo nice verse man. keep elevating.

upping for some votes.............

Voted For: Death

Death took this one in my opinion. He definately had better punches, personals, and wordplay... Definately my fave line was this:
you get no respect like Bish at tha Source awards/
LMAO

Plz return tha favor @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165710

thanks. upping for some votes.............

upping..................

This was feedback posted for Death
 

you dont wana step to me man/
ill put a red dot on this nigga like a 7-Up can/
Not a good opener...

ill melt this nigga like smores/
you get no respect like Bush at tha Source awards/
Ehh, Bush punches are played

you like a tape and i got bullets to "eject"/
you know im tha best when i done fryed all the rest/
No... corny

you cant win, do only thing you can "beat" is your meat/
when you have a fever is da only time you come close to my heat/
One of the best lines in the verse

ill leave ya body over an open fire to roast/
ya need to elevate cuz ya flow needs more work than Michael Jacksons nose/
MJ punches are pretty played too

on this rhyming highway you need to make a U turn/
cuz beside ya name(JaeBurnz354) ya verse also crashed and burned/
Bad closer.. cudda done more with it.

^^ um so whod o you vote for???...................